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My Fanfiction Idea Based on Pokemon Adventures/Special

Post by Red_the_knight on Tue Nov 06, 2012 7:46 am

Okay, this is my most nutty idea I have thought of since I will someday make Pokemon Adventure Chronicles into a video game (a game based from a manga book based on a video game just like Wreck-it Ralph).

Allow me to explain:
I got some confused but thrilled of my game idea based on a manga book (even though it was made), but not in a handheld, more on the Wii where the players get to play as the Pokedex Holders (including Wally), and then every villain, gymleader, champion, rivals, and supporters for a battle.

This time, I would like to present this on a fanfic (almost video game like) that takes place in the future, and the protagonist (a new comer) goes into the past and helps fixes the problem. What do you all think?

Now that my pages are coming, I will take Jonk's advice, and post up pages here. That way, you can get to the next page and find out where to continue off.

You know Page 1 for Chapter 1 is here in this page. Now for the others.
Prologue Chapter 2
Prologue Chapter 3
Prologue Chapter 4, 5, & RGB Chapter 1

Now here's the good news. I was able to make another fanfic on to the fanfiction website, but it will be the final Pokemon fanfic I'm making. If you guys want to go see it finally, go to this link on the website, not advertising, and you'll be there. I will promise to make more chapters, but only depends on so many views and good comments.
Pokemon: Adventure Chronicles Fanfic


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Re: My Fanfiction Idea Based on Pokemon Adventures/Special

Post by Tsurugi on Tue Nov 06, 2012 11:12 am

Sounds a lot like ".hack//LINK" to me, but interesting nonetheless.

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Post by Guest on Tue Nov 06, 2012 3:50 pm

What's Pokemon Adventure Chronicles?

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Post by Red_the_knight on Tue Nov 06, 2012 7:21 pm

Originally posted by Guest
What's Pokemon Adventure Chronicles?

It's the title of the story. It will cover the stories from all the Pokedex Holders (and the Gymleaders). It will also, someday in the future, be a video game. I won't do the fanfic here. There's no forums. It will be else on a link.

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Post by Blazergamer on Tue Nov 06, 2012 8:01 pm

Well there is technically a hack that is based off like the first chapters of the red saga. It was pretty well made, we could continue off that.

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Post by Red_the_knight on Wed Nov 07, 2012 6:31 am

Originally posted by Blazergamer
Well there is technically a hack that is based off like the first chapters of the red saga. It was pretty well made, we could continue off that.

Ooh, I would love to do a Let's Play for that Rom Hack, but this isn't about Rom Hacks. This is about the fanfic I'm going to make first and then later turn it into a game. What do you think?

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Post by Guest on Wed Nov 07, 2012 11:14 am

I think you're going to need to elaborate a bit before we can form an opinion.

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Post by Red_the_knight on Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:05 pm

Originally posted by Guest
I think you're going to need to elaborate a bit before we can form an opinion.

Oh, yes! Allow me to explain.
Summary: This is in the future where everything is back to normal. There are no grunts at work, no villains, and no Pokemon threat. The protagonists become adults and have kids. But soon, one boy discovers a book, a manga book, that acts as a portal to the past. It seems the manga books are not over. There are more villains at work.

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Post by Guest on Wed Nov 07, 2012 6:44 pm

Oh, I remember that one. It was confusing.
But when you're done with it post it here. Maybe in chapters?

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Post by Red_the_knight on Thu Nov 08, 2012 10:56 am

In Chapters? Well, it will have it's own page, but only the first version. I'll be getting to work soon, but first things first: Homework, Job, Project (PokeSpeAni, GDD, Episodes, and Money), and then I'll show you guys my fanfic of the story: Pokemon Adventure Chronicles. Starring: The Pokedex Holders and two new kids from the future.

For now, I am almost finished with the first chapter. Would anyone would like a sneak peek of the first scene? Just it's first page.


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Prologue, Chapter 1

Post by Red_the_knight on Tue Dec 11, 2012 6:30 pm

Here it is. Prologue, Chapter 1

Ever since Team Rocket disbanded after twenty years, the Pokédex Holders can finally relax and their time off. Pidgeys fly all over the region looking for food, wild Pokémon roam the lands for freedom, and legendary Pokémon are at peace. It may have been peace once against, but there is no telling when Team Rocket and other criminals will strike again.
Over at the big tree, sleeping underneath is a yellow mouse with pointy ears, a lightning shape tail, red cheeks, and brown stripes on its back. And next to the yellow mouse is his owner, a boy with brown spiky hair, a blue shirt, orange jacket, long red sharp pants, and green shoes.
The boy is dreaming, a dream he doesn’t like. He dreams in a battle arena with two Pokémon and two trainers. The first trainer has a green large frog like with a big flower on its back and red eyes.
The second figure on the side across the boy is another boy but with blue spiky hair, black clothes, and a serious look. He has a big orange lizard like dragon with dragon wings, sharp claws, and dragon ears.
“This…is it.” He spoke. “This is where we get to end our battle here. Our journey through the Kanto region is child’s play. Now is the time to see who is the real trainer.” They get their Pokémon to charge up their energy: one side fire and one side energy light. The boy shouts, “Jack De Grove Ketchum!”
“John Oak!” The other boy shouts.
They command their Pokémon to unleash the attack, and then both Pokémon released the attacks at each other, causing both energies to mix in. It started to explode.

The boy wakes up from his dream and looks around. He only sees complete sunshine with a lot of trees. The boy yawns and lies back down thinking. He sighs and said, “What a dream.” Half asleep, the boy rubs his eyes and gets. Then the boy looks at his left side and sees his yellow mouse asleep. He smiles and rubs it, “Hey, Pikachu. Let’s go.”
“Pi?” Ask Pikachu waking up.
“We’re going to do some training. And then meet up with Dad at Mt. Silver.” The boy spoke. The yellow mouse stretches and yawns. As for the boy, he gets up and stretches his arms. “Good to stretch. But first, lunch. I sure home mom is making my favorite.”
“Pikachu.” Said Pikachu. It climbs up on the boy’s right shoulder.
The boy takes his wooden sword and head off into the forest.

The boy and his Pikachu reached to an open circle. They look and find a training spot with three woods logs, one rope attached to a branch, a wooden log with marks, and a wooden log hanging on a branch.
“You wanna a piece of me?” Ask the boy, looking at the wooden logs. “Come and get some!” He pulls out his wooden toy sword. Pikachu gets down and gets in position with its owner. “Okay, Pikachu simple basic attacks, and then use Thunderbolt.”
Jack and Pikachu begin practicing their moves together. Anytime Jack swings with his toy two, Pikachu attacks with his tail like a sword; and Jack raises his sword and point, Pikachu uses Thunderbolt.
“Good.” Said Jack. “Now for a three way combo.” Jack swings his sword and Pikachu swings his tail three times hitting the wooden log. Next, Jack jumps and Pikachu jumps. They swipe down slicing the log in two.
“Pi, Pikachu.” Pikachu cheers.
“Don’t stop! If the enemy attacks, we have to defend ourselves!” Jack calls. “Let’s practice dodge and block.” Jack raises his sword in front of him, and Pikachu covers. Next Jack and Pikachu dodge roll left and right. “Oh yeah. No one is going to stop us!”
“Big Brother!” A small child’s voice called. “Help!”
“Huh?” Ask Jack, turning around. He sees a small girl with long yellow ponytail, wearing a long white dress, blue eyes, and a cute face. “Hey, sis, what’s up?”
“It’s the kids. They’re trying to capture Nidorino.” She said.
“What?” Ask Jack, surprised. “Lead the way!”
She takes her brother’s hand and said, “This way!”
Jack looks at Pikachu and said, “Pikachu!” Pikachu gets on his owner’s right shoulder, and Jack’s sister takes Jack and Pikachu back to town.

Around the town in the center circle, a few kids are trying to capture a purple like Pokémon with a horn and purple shaped bunny ears. One kid throws the Poké ball at the Pokémon, but nothing happened.
“Darn!” One child said, “It bounced off again!”
“My turn next!”
“You sure you can handle it?”
“Be quiet.” Said the girl. She looks at the Pokémon and said, “Here goes.” “I’m going to catch this thing and make it my pet.” The ball flies through and hits the odd Pokémon, but it bounced off. It shuns. The little girl becomes surprised and asks, “…It bounced off again?”
Jack and his little sister arrive at the scene seeing for the first time of kids trying to catch a Pokémon but couldn’t.
Jack asks, “Again?”
“Again, big brother.” Said Jack’s little sister.
“Sofia, when are they going to learn to stop?” Ask Jack.
Sofia explains, “They won’t. It’s their first time trying to capture a wild Pokémon, but it’s no good.”
“Okay.” Said Jack, understanding the situation. “I’ll take care of the problem.” He walks to the kids and laughs. He spoke, “That’s no way to catch a Pokémon.” The kids caught Jack’s attention and turn around. “If you want to capture a Pokémon,” he raises his finger, and points at Nidorino, “You got to weaken it first.”
“You know about Pokémon?” Ask the boy with a straw hat.
“Of course I do.” Jack replies.
“Show us?” Ask the boy.
“No problem. Watch the expert.” Jack pulls out his a trading card, and tosses it in front of him. “Golduck! I summon you!” The Poké ball from Jack’s belt opens up, and reveals a humanoid
A blue humanoid duck like with its yellow bill, a ruby gem on its forehead, a crown shape head, and web hands and feet appears from its Poké ball.
“Golduck!” The Pokémon spoke. The kids are amazed.
“Golduck is a good choice against Nidorino.” Jack explains, “During a battle, you need to have a Pokémon pick a good shot against its opponent. Nidorino is ground, and Golduck is water. This makes this battle easier.” He raises his toy sword, and points, “Golduck! Ice Beam!”
Golduck charges up a light blue energy, and blast an ice beam at Nidorino. Nidorino jumps back avoiding the attacks.
Jack is surprised. “Huh? Hey! Hold still!”
“Are you sure you’re a trainer?”
“He can do it.” Said Sofia.
“It’s okay. He won’t get far.” Said Jack. He looks at Nidorino. “Smart guy, huh? I’ll show you.” He commands, “Golduck! Get ready for a counter attack!”
“Golduck!” Golduck spoke.
Nidorino charges at Golduck. Jack raises his toy sword like a shield, and then Golduck guards itself by whacking Nidorino’s horn up. Nidorino is opened.
“Now!” Jack calls. Golduck releases an Ice Beam, and Nidorino is hit. It wobbles around in pain.
“It looks dizzy.” Said the girl.
“Just weaken the Pokémon, and then…” Jack calls, winding up his Poké ball.
But before Jack could even get a chance to capture a Pokémon, a voice calls, “Jack De Grove Ketchum!”
“Yipe!” Jack shrieks. He accidentally tosses the Poké ball, but the ball goes over the Pokémon and out of town. Nidorino escapes. Jack looks stunned and shocked. “I missed?” He turns angry and asks, “Okay, who’s the wise guy that…” Jack sees a woman with long ponytail hair, blue eyes, wearing a yellow vest, white shirt, long black pants, and a yellow dress. He freezes in fear.
“What are you doing?” Ask the woman.
“Uh…teaching the children how to capture, uh, a, uh, Pokémon?” Ask Jack.
“Where’s your sister, Jack?” She asks.
“Here I am.” Said a small child. “Sorry, mommy. Jack was teaching us how to make Pokémon.”
“Sofia.” Said the mother, kneeing down to her daughter, “Where were you?”
Sofia said, “Well, I was just playing with my friends.”
“Are you, Yellow?” Ask the girl, curiously.
“Kids, go back home. We’ll talk about this later, okay?” Ask Yellow.
The kids said, “Okay.” They go home.
“Let’s go home, you two.” Said Yellow.

Yellow takes her children back home. Her daughter is next to her mother while Jack is walking with his Pokémon upset of not giving a demonstration.
“Jack, of all the places, why do you have to run off just like your father?” Ask Yellow. “I told you to do one thing to keep your sister out of trouble, but instead you decided to run off not taking your responsibilities seriously.” Jack is trying to ignore his mom’s orders but couldn’t get that odd dream out of his head. “Are you paying attention, Jack?”
Jack now get his mom’s attention and said, “Uh, sure.”
“Jack, I mean it.” Said Yellow. She stops and turns at Jack. Jack and Pikachu stop and look at Jack’s mother. “If you can’t learn responsibility, then you are not allowed to go anywhere else ever again.”
“What? But mom…” Jack said.
“No buts! Do you understand?”
Jack can’t say no to this, so he looks down and said, “Yes, mom.”
“Good.” Said Yellow.
“Mommy, wait.” Said Sofia.
“Yes, Sofia?” Ask Yellow, tending to her daughter.
Sofia said, “I was the one that went off on my own.”
“What?” Ask Yellow, surprised. “Why? It’s your older brother’s job to watch you.”
“I’m sorry, mommy.” Said Sofia.
Yellow felt bad and said, “As long as you are safe, I won’t blame you.” She looks at Jack, “But Jack, I’ll let this one slide.” Jack and Pikachu are surprised to hear this. They’re off the hook. “But remember, it’s your responsibility to watch over her while I’m gone, okay?”
“Oh, sure mom.” Said Jack, agreeing. “Won’t happen again.”
“Good.” Said Yellow. She takes her children back home. Back at home, Jack, Pikachu, and Sofia wait at the porch hoping to get big news. Jack tries to relax hoping to be more careful about his little sister and the dream, and Sofia is playing with Jack’s Pikachu. Yellow comes out.
Jack, Pikachu, and Sofia caught their mother’s attention. Jack asks, “So, what is it this time?”
“Jack, Sofia, I asked you two for a reason.” Yellow explains, “Tomorrow is our anniversary. I have not seen your father for a while. He must be at Mt. Silver always training.”
“Well, that’s no good, mommy.” Said Sofia, worried. “Daddy should come home even far away.”
Jack said, “It’s not an anniversary without dad. Why does he have to train?”
“I think this battle stuff has gone through his head.” Yellow replies, “Or maybe something else. I just don’t know what to do.”
“Pikachu.” Said Pikachu. He takes Jack’s ear and whispers into him.
Jack agrees the offer and asks, “Say, mom, why don’t you let me and Pikachu go get him?”
Yellow asks, “You? You can handle this job?”
Jack answers, “No problem. You can count on me.” Jack gets off the porch and raises his arms high “Adventure!”
“Great.” Said Yellow. She gives Jack the letters and a basket. “Finish your chores, and then go see him.” Jack and Pikachu are surprised to take this task. Jack takes the letters and basket, and puts them in his own bag. “Take the letters to the Gym Leaders, and remember to give them a muffin I made for them.” Jack smirks, “But you can’t have ‘em.” Jack grunts. He looks at his mom.
Jack jumps over the fence and gets his trading card. He thinks over about his dad been coming around since training started. “Gee. I hope dad doesn’t forget.” Said Jack, feeling his right check. “We need to get dad and mom ready for the anniversary. Jack suggests, “I think it’s faster if we run. I’m sure Arcanine could use a good run.” He pulls out a trading card and shouts, “Arcanine! I summon you!” He tosses the card into the air, and then out of its Poké ball, a big fire red dog with red fur comes out.
“Ar! Ar!” Said the big firedog Pokémon.
“Let’s go, Arcanine! First Brock to get my sword, and then the others.” Jack commands. He gets on Arcanine and Pikachu hangs on to Jack’s right shoulder. “Ride like the wind, Arcanine!”
Arcanine rides off.

They head off to Viridian City first. Up the hill they go while over coming a few obstacles until they come to a close opening near the forest. They soon see men wearing black uniforms, black boots, and caps.
“Huh?” Ask Jack. He pats his Arcanine to slow down and hide behind the trees. They spy towards the men. “What? Team Rocket?” Jack whispers.
“Listen up Rocket Grunts!” The leader spoke. “That Phantom Pokémon can’t get out. We are going to search every last piece of grass or tree until we find it.”
“Phantom Pokémon?” Jack whispers, confused.
“It’s hiding in the grass somewhere. Don’t any of your rest until you find that Phantom Pokémon!” The leader commands.
“Sounds like trouble.” Jack looks at his Pokémon with a nod and get ahead.
The leader asks, “Any questions?” All the grunts shook their head getting their Poké balls out. “Good.” The leader point, “Now get out there!” The leader points towards the forest, “To the western…” But then see Jack and his Pokémon in a furious look, “Forest?”
“And where do you think you grunts are going?” Ask Jack.
“Hey, beat it, kid!” The leader calls. “Mind your own business before someone gets hurt.”
Jack pulls out his toy sword and shouts, “It’s not kid! It’s Jack!”
“Stupid kid. Get him.” Said the leader. The grunts release their Pokémon. A few purple rats like Pokémon with yellow whiskers and purple snakes with a rattle on its tail appear.
Jack gets in position and calls, “I’m ganna crush you!” He shouts, “Arcanine! Let’s get ‘em!” The Rocket Grunts and their Pokémon home in at Jack and his Arcanine. Jack calls, “Arcanine, Flamethrower!” His big red dog blows fire at purple rats and purple snakes. Team Rocket is shocked to see this happen. “Now it’s your turn!” He charges and has Arcanine bite the grunts one-by-one. “HIYA!”
All the grunts scream loud in agony while their knocked Pokémon watch surprised. Arcanine took down the grunts and the grunts’ Pokémon are free to go.
“Ugh! Beaten by a brat!” Said one the grunts.
“Let that be a lesson!” Jack calls. “The next time I see you guys again, the second round I won’t show mercy.”
“You just wait, kid.” Said the leader. “We’ll get more armies and take you down.” The leader passes out.
“I’m sure the cops would like to hear you story.” Said Jack. He takes his Poké gear out, and gives a call. “Hello? Police?” He asks. He listens and explains, “Yes. A couple of Team Rockets are close to Viridian City. Can you come get them? Thank you.” Jack puts the Poké gear away, gets back on Arcanine with Pikachu on his shoulder and goes back to his mission. “See ya.”

In Viridian City, Jack and Pikachu look around for their first delivery. They see citizens around town while a couple of police offers basses them. The town is so small it has a lot of houses, and a marble gym up front.
“Ah. Viridian City.” Said Jack. “It’s about time we got here.”
“Pikachu.” Pikachu agrees.
Just then, a mysterious figure watches Jack and Pikachu walk around. The figure jumps rooftop-to-rooftop, following Jack and Pikachu.
Jack and Pikachu reached to the building. “Gee, I wonder how Mr. Oak is doing?” Before Jack could reach to the door, he senses some thing wrong and backs away. “Huh?”
The figure with blue spiky hair forward, black clothes, blue eyes, and a serious look appears. Next, a small black fox like Pokémon with yellow rings, a stubby black tail, and yellow eyes appears next to the figure. “You shouldn’t be here.”
Jack and Pikachu froze by surprised.
“Hmph.” He said. The figure stands and stares at Jack. “Jack De Grove Ketchum. Here to see my dad?”
Jack replies, “Yeah. I am.”
“No you won’t.” Said the figure. He pulls out his wooden toy sword and calls, “I challenge you!”
Jack feels disturbed and said, “Oh boy. Here we go again.” He pulls out his toy sword too and calls, “Well, bring it!”
“Now we shall see who’s the ultimate trainer.” The figure places a card on his toy sword, and charges in throwing his card in. Jack reacts and tosses his card in while performing a block. One Pokémon on Jack’s side appears. It is a big green frog like Pokémon with a big flower on its back. And the mysterious figure brings out an orange lizard like Pokémon with wings and claws. The frog Pokémon was able to stop the big lizard on time.
But the figure stopped even though the toys are not touching. He smirks, “You’re ganna do better if you want to beat me.”
“Oh no!” Jack calls. “Venusaur! Back away!”
“Charizard! Don’t let it escape!” The figure shouts, “Fire Blast!”
Venusaur jumps back and waits for the right timing. Charizard blasts out a human shape fire towards Venusaur. Venusaur, Jack, and Pikachu dodge to the left and then the right.
“Stand still you coward!” The figure shouts.
“We can’t deflect it!” Jack calls. “We might as well dodge it!”
Charizard blasts three more until it becomes tired. The figure shouts, “What? No!”
Jack shouts, “Venusaur! Go!” He points, “Use Leech Seed!” Venusaur spits out a small seed out from its flower, and plants it on Charizard. Charizard is seeded. It will lose health while fighting.
“URRGH!” The figure groans. “Charizard! Fly!” The orange lizard flies up high into the air.
“Pika!” Pikachu shouts.
Jack calls, surprised, “Oh boy! Just wait for the right timing, and then jump out of the way. Step two will come in.”
While Venusaur and Jack wait, Charizard dives to Venusaur. Venusaur takes a very big hit, but won’t back down. Charizard is still healthy even though it’s losing health.
“Alright! Sleep Powder!” Jack commands. He points, “Release!”
Venusaur’s flower releases blue powder all over the area, and hits Charizard. Charizard smells it and falls a sleep. The figure is surprised. “Not possible!” He shouts, “Charizard! Wake up!” Charizard didn’t wake up.
“Now Cut!” Jack shouts. He swings his toy sword around, and Venusaur attacks Charizard with its vine whip like a sword. Charizard is taking hits, and still losing health. Venusaur however is recovering from Leech Seed.
Charizard is not waking up. It feels sweaty for taking hits and feels weak. Jack calls for a combo, and Venusaur finishes Charizard with another Cut. Charizard roars in pain, and falls in defeat.
The figure drops his weapon to the ground and knees down. “I was far too careless. Tsk!”
“Yes.” Jack calls, raising his toy sword in the air. “Never mess with the best.”
“Pi, Pikachu.” Pikachu cheers, raising his right paw up.
A voice calls, “What’s going on?” Jack, Pikachu, Venusaur, and the figure turn and see another figure. The second figure is a tall man with brown straight spiky hair like the first, brown eyes, a green coat, brown pants, and a medallion around his neck.
“Mr. Oak!” Said Jack, surprised.
“Jack?” Ask Mr. Oak, surprised. “What are you doing here?” He turns at his son, “John. What have you been doing?”
John returns his Charizard back into its Poké ball and replies, “Just doing my job: keeping intruders out of our city.”
“John, I think you’re taking your job too seriously.” Mr. Oak said, “Jack is no intruder.”
“I’ve already learned my lesson.” Said John, leaving, “So I’m going to patrolling.”
Jack, Pikachu, and Venusaur watch John leave. “Has he been always like this?” Ask Jack. He looks at Mr. Oak.
“Well, it’s like me but more aggressive.” Said Mr. Oak. “But I’m sure he’ll come to his senses.” He looks at Jack, “So what brings you here?”
Jack explains while returning his Venusaur back into its Poké ball, “Well, Green, uh, Mr. Oak…”
“Just call me Green when you need to.” Said Green. “There’s no reason to address me as Mr. Oak.”
“Uh, okay.” Said Jack. He gives Green a letter and four muffins, “Green, you are corrigibly invited by my mom and dad’s anniversary. We will be grateful for you, your wife, John, and Lisa to join us. And she made you guys muffins as a snack to accept our invitation.”
“Ah.” Said Green, taking the letter and the muffins. “Thank you, Jack. It’s been a while since I trained your mother.”
“Well, one down, and a lot more to go.” Said Jack. “Thank you for your cooperation, Green. We’ll see you there.” Jack and Pikachu hurry off to their next destination.
As for John, he watches Jack and Pikachu hurry off. He only said, “Hmph.”

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Post by Guest on Tue Dec 11, 2012 7:19 pm

Interesting...
It seems like an alternate universe thing.

Other than grammar mistakes everything seems fine.
I especially like how you describe the Pokemon.

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Post by TheStrawHatKnownAsYellow on Tue Dec 11, 2012 11:18 pm

Wow that was really good. Nice job! Very Happy

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Post by PokeFan72 on Wed Dec 12, 2012 6:44 pm

Very nice!! Very Happy

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Post by Red_the_knight on Thu Dec 13, 2012 7:14 am

Wow! I never knew I get so many admirers for my fanfic.

I tell you all something: when the fanmade shows are posted or I am getting good reviews about my fanfics (and I would like an honest opinion about my fanfic good or bad), I could post some more until I've reached to the end of the prologue.

Do we have a deal? Just not too many. Wink

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Post by YellowOfTheViridianForest on Thu Dec 13, 2012 8:25 pm

That was nice! It's detailed and everything. :>w<:

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Re: My Fanfiction Idea Based on Pokemon Adventures/Special

Post by Red_the_knight on Sun Dec 16, 2012 5:28 pm

Author's notes:
Okay, I'm working on Chapter 2 right now, but it seems I'm having a little trouble. While the main protagonist travels all over the region, he goes to Brock's for a sword, and then Misty. I have a question about this:

#1: Is it okay if I use the Gyarados mobile submarine?
#2: What will Misty's girl child act like?
#3: Anyone has their own characters that would like to be part of it, they have to be either character's kids.

Reason: I am not so good at coming up with names. I hit my right head real hard back at High School in eleventh grade, and I've lost my creativity to boost up my math brain.

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Post by Guest on Mon Dec 17, 2012 12:12 pm

1. Don't see why not.
2. Like Misty? Depends who her father is.
3. What about Orange and Violet?

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Re: My Fanfiction Idea Based on Pokemon Adventures/Special

Post by Red_the_knight on Mon Dec 17, 2012 1:05 pm

Originally posted by Guest
1. Don't see why not.
2. Like Misty? Depends who her father is.
3. What about Orange and Violet?

Oh yeah. Team Rocket machines as part bosses here I come. As for the father, it is actually anonymous not figuring out who did Misty end up with (I blame the ships). However, I'm going to have to give her a name.

Oh yeah! But in retro spec, they're adults by now. Judging by fan ships, I betcha the audience might try and put them together, but my answer is: not happening!

Let me see what I can do during the Prologue and see what you folks think.

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Post by TheStrawHatKnownAsYellow on Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:16 pm

Deal! : D

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Post by TheStrawHatKnownAsYellow on Mon Dec 17, 2012 8:27 pm

1. Sure!
2. Basically a sort of Cocky attitude based on her father (whoever it is)
3. Okay this is a long one. Scarlet is a girl traveling from region to region and meets up with Jack while he is delivering. She's the daughter of Ruby and Sapphire but started traveling when she was young. She has her father's eyes and mom's hair. And is Jack's age. She goes with Jack on her Mightyena (Ruby's). And occasionally makes fun of him. Maybe she has a crush on him? Anwser: IDK she has her own mind!
Sorta long huh? XD Well those are my anwsers

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Post by Red_the_knight on Tue Dec 18, 2012 9:16 am

Originally posted by TheStarHatKnownAsYellow
1. Sure!
2. Basically a sort of Cocky attitude based on her father (whoever it is)
3. Okay this is a long one. Scarlet is a girl traveling from region to region and meets up with Jack while he is delivering. She's the daughter of Ruby and Sapphire but started traveling when she was young. She has her father's eyes and mom's hair. And is Jack's age. She goes with Jack on her Mightyena (Ruby's). And occasionally makes fun of him. Maybe she has a crush on him? Anwser: IDK she has her own mind!
Sorta long huh? XD Well those are my anwsers

The answer for 1 has been spoken by two.

It sure is strange to have her sometimes as cocky and act as Misty.

Scarlet, huh? Is she based off of your original character idea for Ruby and Sapphire? Make sure she has a personality or behavior, okay? I think I'll hold her until I've reached to Gen 3 from the volumes. They sure take their slow sweet time, but sometimes easy to write down.


Anyone else? How about you Memieko? Tsugiri? Sai? For now, I'm almost done. Just need to introduce Violet. Just don't know how she'll react when Jack comes around and bumps into her.

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Re: My Fanfiction Idea Based on Pokemon Adventures/Special

Post by Guest on Tue Dec 18, 2012 11:03 am

Violet and Orange aren't really in the same timeline as the main characters so they can be whatever age you want.

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Post by TheStrawHatKnownAsYellow on Tue Dec 18, 2012 3:52 pm

Actually i think introduce her as like she's just traveling around i guess and bumps into Jack. That's all i got XD

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Post by TheStrawHatKnownAsYellow on Tue Dec 18, 2012 5:00 pm

Violet that is

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