Storyboard Artist Audition

Hello!! I'm SilverWingStorm, but you can call me SWS or Silver!!

I'm auditioning as a Storyboard Artist. Admittedly, this is the first time I've ever done a storyboard but I'm certain that the more I do it, the better I'll get. :L

So here's the pages:

(1) i39.tinypic.com/flapns.png
(2) i40.tinypic.com/ej5ll.png
(3) i40.tinypic.com/qnmyo9.png

I really hope that my style didn't botch anything and that my handwriting is relatively readable. I await your decision and critique eagerly! \(;w;)/

Your artwork is very rough and some notes are unclear. Perhaps you should find some tutorials on how to make a storyboard. There are plenty of good ones on the Internet.