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Post by Guest Thu Dec 20, 2012 9:32 pm

I'm sorry, I don't understand your question. ^^;

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Post by Red_the_knight Fri Dec 21, 2012 10:28 am

Okay, I'll be general. Is this how you would imagine Violet's behavior or should she be a little excited?
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Post by Guest Fri Dec 21, 2012 10:35 am

Oh, she seemed fine to me. I think each of them had a profile somewhere in the special show section.

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Post by Red_the_knight Fri Dec 21, 2012 11:10 am

Oh yeah. Let's see, highly-energetic, a little stupid, clumsy, and nice. I'm almost done, just need to finish up the dungeon like Jack and his Pokemon are going through. And then another encounter battle, this time Janine's son.
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Post by Guest Fri Dec 21, 2012 11:54 am

Are the cards used the same as in the TCG?
Or are they auxiliary like in Digimon Tamers?
So far the fights seem secondary to the story but it'll still be nice to know the rules. I guess you can make a character teach a new trainer how to fight somewhere in the plot. Orange is a former TCG champion so maybe you can work that in there too.

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Post by Red_the_knight Fri Dec 21, 2012 7:06 pm

I guess I'm going to have to answer some questions, right? Okay, time for some Q&A.

The cards you've read? They are the same as TCG, but not the Digimon Tamers who uses a Digivice. That's stealing. Same thing with Yugioh that uses duel disks, no. I have Jack and John either pull out a card or throw it to bring out a Pokemon. Why? Since Orange is an expert dueling (and I did had a different fanfiction of both Jack and Peter at the dueling tournament) I figured they should have something unique. They need a hobby for short, but later become duelists for fighting and trading.

And the second question I'm guess: what are the rules for battling? During the first rule, it's always knock all your Pokemon out, and the second rule is knock one Pokemon out while battling. The first rule is the same, but from John and Red's battle, they are like bosses or like how I would make a future video game, Beginning Boss Fights.
It looks like a simple one-on-one fight, so the rule still applies. For example, you guys read Jack's Venusaur-vs-John's Charizard, and Jack's Pidgeot-vs-Red's Venusaur. So the rules are the same. I'm guessing each of the trainers are only applying sometimes to 1-on-1, 3-on-3, and 6-on-6.

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Post by Guest Fri Dec 21, 2012 8:06 pm

I'm probably over-thinking since the story is still enjoyable without this knowledge, but I do have some questions.

1. Where do they get the cards?

2. Do they use trainer and energy cards?

3. How do they catch Pokemon? With cards or balls?

4. Is there a limit to how many cards they can carry?

5. Do the weapons actually do anything in battle?

6. Why didn't Yellow send the invitations through the mail instead of sending Jack when she clearly showed signs of separation anxiety?! (You don't have to answer that one)

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Post by Red_the_knight Sat Dec 22, 2012 12:23 pm

Originally posted by Guest
I'm probably over-thinking since the story is still enjoyable without this knowledge, but I do have some questions.

1. Where do they get the cards?

2. Do they use trainer and energy cards?

3. How do they catch Pokemon? With cards or balls?

4. Is there a limit to how many cards they can carry?

5. Do the weapons actually do anything in battle?

6. Why didn't Yellow send the invitations through the mail instead of sending Jack when she clearly showed signs of separation anxiety?! (You don't have to answer that one)

Shocked Holy Zucion! What have I done? Everyone is getting to watch and read my fanfiction including Guest! I didn't know my fanfic is that popular!
I'm just kidding. I'm surprise my fanfic is becoming addicting. Okay, now I should answer the questions right now.

1. Where did Jack and John got the cards? Trading Card store. Since Orange was around that means Trading Cards have been popular. But Pokemon battles are still popular.

2. Who? Jack and John? Nah. During the battle, that's only if your dueling. For an original duel with Pokemon and Pokeballs, they don't use Trainer Cards and Energy Cards. The Pokemon cards are to bring them out.

3. Balls (any set). I don't think throwing a piece of paper or an index card at a Pokemon would work like that.

4. Why yes. Pay attention: each of the trading cards have rule settings of using your deck and having a back up deck. The original deck carries up to 60 and the backup deck is sometimes limitless (or 100 because there's too much).

5. Yes. Remember how Bruno and Erika bring them out? They bring the Pokemon out. As for the toys Jack and John are carrying, they act as warriors like Maylene. Like the master, the Pokemon does the same move. However, each trainer will act different to one another.

6. It's Jack's chore. It seems to be a punishment and later reward. I didn't even know Yellow would have separation anxiety.
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Post by Guest Sat Dec 22, 2012 2:12 pm

Alright.

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Post by Red_the_knight Sun Dec 23, 2012 12:35 pm

Here we go.

Chapter 3
Jack and Pikachu, on Pidgeot, arrive safely to Cinnabar Island. It seems brand with a few people and a few buildings. The old gym is back to its knees again. And the mansion is still abandon. There is just one problem, and that is the volcano on the far side of the island.
“As long as the volcano is not active, we’re okay.” Said Jack, worried.
“Pika, Pi.” Said Pikachu.
A voice asks, “Excuse me, but would you be Jack?”
Jack and Pikachu turn around, and then see a tall man wearing glasses, a coat, long brown pants, and a black shirt. The tall man has a shiny bold head.
“Blaine.” Said Jack, surprised. Jack and his Pokémon turn around. “How’re you doing?”
“We’re doing okay, Jack.” Said Blaine. “It seems you’re doing delivery service.”
Jack asks, surprised, “How’d you know?”
Blaine replies, “The gym leaders replied to me. They also mentioned about ‘Team Rocket returning?’”
“Oh, you knew?” Ask Jack.
“It’s alright.” Said Blaine. “Just hand over the letter and the muffin your mother sent, and I’m sure your delivery service is done.” Jack pulls out the letter and muffin, and then gives Blaine the letter and the muffin. “Thank you.”
Jack cheers, “Yes! All the letters are done! I can finally get my spaghetti!”
“Ah.” Said Blaine, interested, “So your mom is making your favorite dinner, huh?”
Jack and Pikachu get on Pidgeot. Jack said, “Before I go and get my favorite meal, its time I go see dad.”
“You’re going to see you father, Red?” Ask Blaine.
“Yep. He’s been busy for years.” Jack answers. “But soon, I will make my dad and claim my own title!” He taps his big bird and calls, “Yah!” Pidgeot flies high to the sky, and then flies west.
“Good luck, boy.” Said Blaine.

Up in the sky, Jack and Pikachu fly on over to Mt. Silver with Pidgeot carries them. They come out of the Kanto Region area and then finally reached to Mt. Silver. They look around and found an inside opening.
“Pidgeot!” Jack calls. “There!” Pidgeot dives through the open hole, and lands on the ground. Jack and Pikachu jump off and look around. Jack calls, “Dad! Dad!”
“Pikachu!” Pikachu shouts.
They see nothing but complete dark purple cave walls, a few stalactites, and a few open holes as passageways.
“Hm.” Said Jack, thinking. “Where did he go?”
But then, Jack spots another shadow and rolls to the right. Pikachu and Pidgeot follow Jack and turn around. Jack sees two figures: one tall man wearing a cloak and the other a big frog like Pokémon with a big flower on its back.
“Hey! Who are you?” Jack calls. The tall man said nothing. “So be it.” He calls, “Pidgeot! Go!”
“Pidgo!” Pidgeot flies high and dives in on the big frog.
But then, the figure shouts, “Venusaur! Dodge it!” The big frog jumps back avoiding Pidgeot.
“What?” Ask Jack, surprised.
“Poisonpowder!” The figure shouts. The figure’s frog releases a purple gas out of its flower, and smokes Pidgeot. Pidgeot becomes poisoned.
“Oh no!” Jack shouts, surprised.
“And I thought you learned a lot from your father.” The figure taunts, “It’s too bad you’re not him.” Jack growls. “I was looking forward to fighting your father, but you’re weak as he is.”
Jack pulls out his toy sword and shouts, “I’m ganna slice you down!”
“With a toy sword?” Ask the figure. “You’re just a kid.”
Jack charges with his Pidgeot and shouts, “Wing Attack!” Pidgeot attacks Venusaur by the side while Jack swings his toy sword like having Pidgeot fight. “EIYAAGH!” Venusaur is hit, but still standing.
“Child’s play.” Said figure. “Use Leech Seed.”
“Pidgeot! Look out!” Jack shouts. Venusaur spits out a small side, and homes in at Pidgeot. Pidgeot flies high. “Yes!” Jack tosses an Antidote to heal Pidgeot. “Okay.”
But the figure comes in quick and shouts, “Poisonpowder!”
Venusaur releases another Poisonpowder. Jack covers his mouth, but Pidgeot is caught off guard. It becomes poisoned again. “Hey! That was a cheap move!” He swings his sword again. “Wing Attack!”
Pidgeot dives in at Venusaur and hits Venusaur. Venusaur is hit but Pidgeot is still poisoned.
The figure shouts, “Solarbeam!” Venusaur releases an immense light at Pidgeot and Jack, and both Pidgeot and Jack are sent flying.
“Venusaur!” Venusaur shouts, releasing a light beam attack at Jack and Pidgeot.
“AAAAGH!” Jack shouts.
“Pidgo!” Pidgeot shouts, attacked. They keep flying towards a cave wall, but instead fall down and tumble over.
“Is that all you can do?” Ask the figure. The figure signals his Venusaur to attack again. Jack and Pidgeot charge in again, but this time wait for the right moment. The figure shouts, “Solarbeam!”
“Venusaur!” Venusaur releases another beam of light. This time Jack and Pidgeot foresee the attack, and avoid it. The figure and Venusaur are surprised.
Jack swings his toy sword again, and Pidgeot attacks. “See ya!” Pidgeot attacks Venusaur by a barrage, and then knocks out Venusaur.
“Venu!” Venusaur cries.
“GAAAAGH!” The figure cries, surprised.
“Ve! Ve!” Venusaur tries to stay up, but howls, “SAUR!” Venusaur falls down.
“I…lost.” Said the figure.
Jack points his toy sword at the figure and said, “Take back you said about my dad!”
The figure said, “Fine. I’ll take it back. Just to let you…you did well, son.” Jack and his Pokémon are confused. The figure reveals his spiky black hair and red eyes. He’s almost like Jack but older. “Hi, son.”
“Dad?” Ask Jack, surprised.
“Pika?” Ask Pikachu.
The man gets up and said, “Forgive me for poisoning your Pokémon, but I was expecting your arrival shortly, Jack.” He restores Pidgeot from the poison, and Pidgeot is healthy. “There we go, good as new.”
“Pidgo!” Said Pidgeot.
“Thanks dad.” Said Jack, grateful.
Jack’s father looks at his son and asks, “So, Jack, what brings you here?”
Jack explains, “Well, dad, or should I said, my father who is Red Ketchum, you’ve been gone for some time since I saw you. Mom and my little sister are worried about you.”
Red said, “Don’t worry about me, Jack. I’ve been fine.” He looks outside, “Then again, I do have my concerns about what’s been happening.”
Jack said, “That’s right. You saw what’s going on, right? Team Rocket appeared out of nowhere and started attacking again.”
“Yes. I’ve heard.” Said Red. “They were going after the Phantom Pokémon and tried to capture Misty’s Pokémon again.”
“How’d you know?”
“The same events happened to be before. Ever since my journey, I wanted to stop Team Rocket and end their reign of terror, and that terror is over. The man, Giovanni, was responsible for his work of art. He tried to conquer the world with an iron fist, but for what reason: his own son missing. The poor man had so much grudge to find his son, but when Giovanni lost to me, he disbanded Team Rocket ages ago. And now they’re back again, and this their third time striking back.
“But it’s strange. How could the events come back after I took them down? It’s like history is repeating itself. If they’re back, that means Giovanni, no, a dark version of Giovanni has returned. This could be mean trouble to all the Gym Leaders and the new Elite Four. I’ll be going out there and do my job again thirty-seven years ago. And once Team Rocket is gone, we’ll get to the bottom of this.”
“Whoa, hold on, dad.” Said Jack, interrupting. His father looks at him. “Maybe I should help out too. It’s not only your job, it’s mine too.”
Red thinks over it and said, unsure, “I don’t know. You, your mom, and little sister could get hurt. I might put the risk of hurting you than taking out Team Rocket.”
“Please dad!” Jack begs, “I can do it! My Pokémon and I beat the Pokémon league, and I’m strong enough to beat the Elite Four. You just gatta let me try!”
Red thinks over it. “Are you willing to do this? Once you help out, there’s no turning back.”
Jack pats his chest and said, “Leave it to us!”
“Pi, Pikachu!” Pikachu agrees.
“Pidgo!” Pidgeot agrees.
Red smiles and said, “Okay. On one condition.” Jack, Pikachu, and Pidgeot are curious. “You boys do it on my occasion, okay? My friends and I know Team Rocket way back. You and your Pokémon will be doing heavy training, do you understand?” Jack and his Pokémon nod. “Good. Now, before we do anything else?”
Jack remembers, “Oh yes. There’s one more thing you should know, dad.”
“If it’s about your birthday don’t worry.” Said Red.
“Uh, no.” Said Jack.
“Oh, I get it. It’s your little sister’s birthday.” Said Red, guessing. “Silly me. Tell me, what does she want?”
Jack shakes his head, “You’re not even close.” Red looks surprised. “Our birthdays are not coming in.”
“Then what is it?” Ask Red.
Jack answers scared, “Well…it’s you and mom’s Anniversary.”
Red thinks this through, and shouts outside, “WAAAAAAAAGH!” He picks up Jack, panicking that he forgot. Red even shook his son like crazy. “How could I forget our Anniversary? Do you remember what happens the last time I forgot about our Anniversary? What do I do? You gatta help me, Jack! You’re my only hope!”
“Wa! Wa! Wa! Wa!” Jack shouts, shaken over and over. “Stop! Shaking! Me! Please! I’m! Going! To! Be! Dizzy!”
Red stops shaking Jack, and drops his son. Jack feels dizzy almost spinning around. “You’re right.” Said Red, calming down, “I’m sorry. I don’t know what came over me.”
Jack shakes off the dizziness and looks at his dad. Next, he looks at his Pokémon, and then looks at his dad again. “Uh, dad. Maybe some flowers would be nice, or some chocolate bonbons.”
Red stops and looks at his son, “Uh, Jack, that’s not enough.”
“Oh!” Said Jack, surprised. “Right. Uh.” He thinks over it. Then, Jack gets an idea, “That’s it!” Red and Venusaur look at Jack. “Dad, what does mom see in you?”
“That I’m a grown adult?” Ask Red.
“No! You’re her hero.” Said Jack. “If you can do something heroic for her, maybe she’ll forget about the old Anniversary! Plus, a nice dinner date would be nice, and fireworks, and…”
“Whoa. Slow down, Jack.” Said Red, stopping his son, “I don’t want to go too far for our Anniversary, but you are right for an Italian idea. And there’s the heroic part. How am I going to pull that off?”
“I know you’ll figure something this out, dad!” Said Jack. “This’ll be great!”
“Okay, I’ll do it.” Said Red. “Jack, tell your mom and your little sister I’m coming back home.”
Jack cheers, “Yeah! Best Anniversary Party ever!” He hurries to the ledge and shouts, “What are you waiting for? Let’s go!”
Red shouts, “Jack! Stop!”
Jack stops close to the ledge. He turns around and asks, “Yes?”
Red suggested, “I got a better idea.” He walks to his son and requests, “Jack, take out your arms. Hold them forward.” Jack holds his arms straight. Red puts heavy rocks on Jack’s arms, and then his ankles. Jack can feel the heavy rocks pulling his arms down until they pull Jack’s hand down to the floor.
Jack asks, surprised, “Uh?”
“You know, Brock, right?” Ask Red. “This should help you improve better.”
“What are…what?” Ask Jack, confused.
“Pika, Pi?” Ask Pikachu, confused.
Red explains, “These rocks will help you train to be in top shape.” Jack has a distinct shocked look in his eyes. “You will train your arms for strength and your legs for speed. You won’t be able to take them off unless you have trained your body and speed very well. When you’re done, I will take them off. Do you understand?”
“Uh…” Ask Jack, clueless.
“Good.” Said Red. He returns his Venusaur back into its Poké ball by a cloud of smoke, and then brings out his second Pokémon. “I’ll be waiting for you back at the Kanto Region.” The Poké ball opens up with a cloud of smoke, and then reveals an ancient prehistoric dinosaur with wings and big sharp teeth.
“Wait. Then how do I get down?” Ask Jack.
Red gets on his Pokémon and replies, “Well, Pidgeot can’t carry you back, so you’ll have to make your way down. It is very important to rely on your Pokémon.” He pats his Pokémon, “Aerodactyl, let’s fly.” The Pokémon flies off carrying Red back home. He left Jack and Jack’s Pokémon behind in Mt. Silver. A gust of wind blows Jack.
“Oh boy.” Said Jack. He turns around and sees only an open arch hole. “I guess I’m stuck here until I find a way out.” Jack pulls out a Poké ball and said, “Return, Pidgeot. You need rest from the battle.” He tosses the ball, and the ball hit Pidgeot returning Pidgeot back into the Poké ball. Jack puts the ball away, and lets Pikachu on his right shoulder. “Okay! So I won’t take them off, but I can make it down! Dad! I’m ganna make you proud!”
“Pikachu!” Pikachu agrees.
Jack hurries through the open arch, and make his way down the mountain.

Jack and Pikachu make their way down the mountain. However, with Jack wearing the heavy rock bracelet and anklet, he’s slower than his Pikachu. Pikachu looks behind and sees Jack trying to catch up.
“Sorry, Pikachu.” Said Jack, trying to catch up. “I’m not as fast as you think. I just need you and Arcanine’s speed to make it down the mountain.” Pikachu gets on his master’s right shoulder and let Jack try and run. “Mt. Silver sure is beautiful. No wonder dad stays here a lot.”
“Pikachu.” Said Pikachu.
“You said it.” Said Jack. Before Jack and Pikachu could advance, big blue bats with big mouths and small fangs come out from the ceiling and swarming on Jack and Pikachu.
“Agh. Stupid Golbats.” Said Jack. He swings his toy sword shooing the blue bats with big mouth and small fangs. “Get out of my way before I let you have it.”
Pikachu swings his tail like a sword to repel the bats. The Golbats fly back up. This time, Jack and Pikachu reach to a steep slope all the way to the bottom. Jack and Pikachu slide down.
“Yahoo!” Jack shouts.
“Pika!” Pikachu shouts.
They come into their first obstacle puzzle, a simple puzzle that requires Jack’s Pokémon. There are three boulders and three potholes.
“A puzzle huh?” Ask Jack. “Seems easy.” He brings out his card holds it forward, “Primeape! I summon you!” The ball comes out of Jack’s belt, opens up smoke, and then a pig monkey like Pokémon with big white fur, boxing gloves, and black bracelets and anklets appears. “Primeape. Power up with Strength.”
“Pri!” Said Primeape. It gets pumped up. Primeape is able to move boulders. It pushes the boulders along with Jack and Pikachu. One-by-one, all the boulders are pushed in. “Primeape!” Primeape cheers.
“No problem.” Said Jack. A secret entrance opens. Jack, Pikachu, and Primeape enter through. They encounter wild Pokémon. “Primeape, time to show these guys your muscles.” They see a pack of big brown grizzly bear like Pokémon with white circle rings on their stomachs. “Yipe.” Said Jack, surprised. “Ursarings.”
“Pika.” Pikachu agrees.
Jack thinks, “Then again, I could use a lot of training, so I guess battling won’t be so bad.” He jumps out with his pig monkey Pokémon, and shouts, “Hey! Ursarings! Want a piece of me?” Five grizzle bear Pokémon see Jack and his Pokémon, and then roar at them. Jack and Primeape get in position. “Come and get some.” He puts his gloves on. “I won’t need my toy sword.”
The Ursarings charge at Jack and Primeape. Pikachu hangs on Jack’s right shoulder.
Jack shouts, “Brick Break!” As Jack punches, Primeape punches a barrage attack to the first Ursaring. “Ha! Gotcha!”
“Pri!” Primeape shouts, knocking the first Ursaring out. The grizzle bear Pokémon are shocked to see one of their bear brothers out cold. They howl and become furious. The grizzle bear Pokémon attack again. Even one is charging an energy ball.
“Here it comes!” Jack shouts. “Dodge!” Jack and Primeape jump to the right. The Ursaring in the back blasts a focus blast attack, but misses. “Here I go again! Brick Break!” Primeape continues attacking, chopping the second Ursaring and then the third. “Ready?” Jack pulls his arms back, and then chops around like an X-Scissor chop, “Cross Chop!”
“Primeape!” Primeape chaps the fourth Ursaring down by its neck, and then the fourth Ursaring goes down. The last one is not giving up without a fight. It charges up an energy and then blasts a powerful beam at Primeape. “Pri!” Primeape is hit, and flies further.
“Whoa!” Jack said, surprised, “Hyper Beam.” Primeape manages to tumble forward, and then charge in the attack. The last grizzle bear Pokémon can’t move. “Last move! Brick Break!” Primeape chops the bear Pokémon, and Ursaring takes a hit without avoiding. All the wild Pokémon are wiped out. Jack and his Pokémon press forward, but they can’t go without a souvenir.
“Alright.” Said Jack, giving Primeape medicine, “Hyper Potion.”
“Pri.” Said Primeape, grateful.
“Just in time.” Said Jack, feeling his arms. “I’m almost able to lift the rocks on my own. Time to solve this maze.” They look around the old cave to try and look for a way out. “Let’s see. This place is huge for a battle run, and the puzzle solving was way back. I’m guessing dad was making sure I’m prepared for battle before Team Rocket.”
“Pika, Pi?” Ask Pikachu, curious. “Pikachu.”
Jack replies, “Yep. I’m guessing dad had a feeling we’re coming here.” He thinks about it, “Let’s see. The next Pokémon would I have to face is perhaps Golbat since Primeape doesn’t stand a chance, or Venusaur.”
“Pri.” Said Primeape.
“The sooner we get out of her, the better we are free to go eat!” Said Jack. “It’s too bad I didn’t to check out what kind of Pokémon live here. I saw Golbat and Ursaring. What’s next?”
When they come out of the big arch hole, they enter inside a very large room. They look around and see a waterfall, a big lake, and more open arch holes. Jack and his Pokémon are wondering if they took a wrong turn, but they see an open hole across them. They also look down over the ledge and see the water.
“Dad sure loves a good challenge.” Said Jack. He pulls out a Poké ball and said, “Okay, Primeape. Take a good rest.” The ball touches Primeape, a smoke covers Primeape, and Primeape goes back into the Poké ball. “Let’s see. What’s the next step?”
Pikachu points, “Pika!” Jack sees a stalagmite across the lake.
“Oh yeah.” Said Jack. He holds up the card and calls, “Venusaur! I summon you!” The Poké ball comes off of Jack’s belt, and then coming out of the Pokémon is a big green frog like Pokémon with a big flower.
“Venu.” It said.
Jack calls, “Venusaur, can you get us across?”
“Venu!” Venusaur said. It releases two long green vines out from the stem, and then shoots it forward a rope. The vine grabs on to the stalagmites.
“Good.” Said Jack. “Keep it steady.” He and Pikachu get on the vine, but try to keep their balance.
Venusaur felt Jack’s heavy body. It tries to keep it up.
Jack calls, “Whoa!” He turns, “Venusaur, sorry if I’m heavy because of my rock bracelet and anklet, but try and keep your vine steady until we get across. Pikachu can walk across the vine gap, but Jack needs to keep his balance before he falls off. “Okay. Balance. Balance.” But then, there was a squeak. Jack froze and looks up. He be becomes surprised, “Oh no.” Big blue bats with big mouths and small fangs fly down on Jack, Pikachu, and Venusaur.
“Golbat!” They spoke.
“Golbats!” Jack shrieks.
“Pikachu!” Pikachu shrieks.
Jack turns around, “They’re coming after us, and Venusaur!” Venusaur sees some Golbats coming after him, but tries to shoo them away with its vine. Jack and Pikachu keep their grip on the vines without falling out. “Ve, Nu, Saur, Saur, Saur, Saur!”
Pikachu panics, and shouts, “Pikachu!” Pikachu shoots electricity at the Golbats, but it accidentally shocks Jack. Venusaur is shocked but at a low shock damage. The Golbats flee.
Jack said, burned, “Good job, Pikachu. Ugh.”
“Pikachu.” Said Pikachu, apologizing.
Jack shakes off the burn crisp skin, and keeps moving. Jack and Pikachu made it across. “Finally.” He pulls out Venusaur’s Poké ball, and tosses it to Venusaur, “Venusaur, return.”
The ball flies straight to Venusaur, the smoke covers Venusaur, and Venusaur is back into its ball. The ball flies all the way to Jack, and Jack catches the ball. He puts it away.
“Good. On our way home now.” Said Jack. “I’ve had enough of this. I think the rocks tried to pull me down.”
“Pikachu.” Pikachu agrees.
“We’re almost out.” He said. Jack and Pikachu press one, and then find more Pokémon wild pack. This time, there are huge rocks. “Oh great. Rocks.”
Jack and Pikachu start climbing on the odd rocks. They reach to the top and see a light across the room. That light shines a way to the exit.
“An exit?” Ask Jack. “Finally! A way out!”
“Pika!” Pikachu cheers.
But then, something shook the ground. Jack and Pikachu felt something moving underneath their feet. They look down and see the rocks moving.
“Uh, Pikachu?” Ask Jack. “Rocks don’t move, right?”
“Pika?” Ask Pikachu, confused.
“Okay.” Said Jack. “Because something tells me those are not ordinary rocks.” He pulls out his toy sword, and Pikachu on his right shoulder. The rocks curl around Jack and Pikachu, and then a huge rock head with a horn, big eyes, and almost have a snake head appears. Jack and Pikachu froze in fear. “Uh, hi?”
It roars at them.
Jack shouts, “Onix!”
“Pika!” Pikachu shouts.

To be continued...
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Post by TheStrawHatKnownAsYellow Sun Dec 23, 2012 12:50 pm

Nice job! Very Happy I just love Red's Reaction " WAAAAAAAAAGH I FOR GOT OUT ANNIVERSARY ! DO YOU REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED LAST TIME I FORGOT OUR ANNIVERSARY!?" That is perfect. <3
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Post by YellowOfTheViridianForest Mon Dec 24, 2012 9:54 am

I bet Yellow got mad at him last time and probably gave him some kind of punishment. So now he is scared. I like that part, that was great.
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Post by Red_the_knight Mon Dec 24, 2012 10:09 am

I wonder how many well made fans are going to make a picture of adult Red in his shocked look forgetting about their anniversary. Chapter 4 will be coming a little late. I need to work up the nerve to fight against Giant Onix.

Anyone else like the comments about chapter 3, especially Red freaking out?
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Post by Red_the_knight Mon Dec 31, 2012 4:29 pm

Attention all fanfic lovers. Since the opening voice acting is back, I will get back to my voice audition and keep my illustration. Just need to get one main character or two, and then I am coming back.

As for the fanfic, it's still coming. I haven't working on Ep. 4. But you'll be surprised who is coming out next.
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Post by TheStrawHatKnownAsYellow Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:51 pm

Okay. Smile
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Post by Red_the_knight Fri Jan 04, 2013 9:37 am

Here we go, Chapter 4. But I must warn you, the drama is a little high for all kids.

Chapter 4
The mighty rock snake pull up its rock snake tail, and then slams it towards Jack and Pikachu. Jack and Pikachu see the rock tail come in, and jump out of the way on time. They land on to the ground and stare at the huge Onix.
“Gee, rocky, take a chill pill.” Jack jokes. He brings out his toy sword with Pikachu next to him. The huge Onix stares at Jack and Pikachu. “Okay, don’t take a chill pill. I guess I’ll battle you with my Pikachu.”
Pikachu doesn’t stand a chance against Onix, but Jack was prepared to teach Pikachu a good move to fight against Onix. Electric types does not work on ground types, but water can. It does look easy to knock out an Onix; however, Jack and his Pokémon are a good sport to make this a fair fight.
“Pikachu, let’s keep our distance away from Onix and try and use Slam.” Said Jack.
“Pika?” Ask Pikachu, confused. While Jack and Pikachu are talking, they try and get close to Onix.
Jack explains. “I know the attack won’t work, but we should be able to hit Onix by its horn, not the body.” Onix pulls back. “Get ready.” Onix charges. Jack and Pikachu dodge to the left. Onix missed. Jack and Pikachu jump on to Onix’s head and hang tight. Onix shakes Jack and Pikachu. “W-whoa!”
“Pika!” Pikachu shrieks.
Onix roars trying to shake Jack and Pikachu off. Onix then finally gives up shaking.
“Okay! Slam with your tail!” Jack shouts. Pikachu attacks with its tail on to Onix’s horn. It has no effect on Onix.
Pikachu complains, “Pikachu!”
“Give me a break.” Jack replies, “We’re practicing for a good slice, aren’t we?” Onix starts to move around while Jack and Pikachu are on Onix’s head. It keeps shaking until deciding to go underground. “Oh boy! Jump!” Jack and Pikachu jump off when Onix burrowed underground. “I didn’t know an Onix could do that?”
“Pi, Pikachu!” Pikachu said, surprised.
Onix can come out and attack while underground. This could mean Pikachu is in danger for one big knockout attack.
“Pikachu, we need to be quick.” Jack alerts. “Keep moving!” Jack and Pikachu run for their lives away from the hole. They wait for Onix to come out. The ground shook underneath, and Jack shouts, “Dodge!” Jack and Pikachu roll forward and out come Onix out of the ground. “That was close.” It roars trying to catch Jack and Pikachu.
“Pika!” Pikachu shouts, avoiding Onix.
“Yikes!” Jack calls. “Onix can’t seem to learn, can he?” When Onix try to attack again, Jack and Pikachu jumped on to Onix’s head on more time, and Pikachu attacks with its tail. “That’s it! Slam Onix like a sword.”
One last blow, and Onix goes down.
“Alright!” Jack cheers.
“Pika!” Pikachu cheers.
Jack and Pikachu off of Onix and turn around. “I guess eight hits did the trick.” Onix wakes up surprising Jack and Pikachu. It gets up from the ground and stares at them. “We’re sorry, Onix.” Said Jack, apologizing. “We’re just trying to get out.” He pulls out a chocolate bar and offers. “You want some chocolate?”
Onix takes the chocolate bar out of Jack’s hand, hurls it up and catches it by a big bite. It slitters out even know it’s a huge rock snake.
“Okay! Goodbye!” Jack calls, waving goodbye.
“Pikachu!” Pikachu calls.
“Don’t be a stranger!” Jack looks at Pikachu and said, “Let’s go home. I’m hungry.”
Jack and Pikachu leave the cavern.

They come outside of the mountain and on to the grasslands. They look around seeing the sun setting west. Jack and Pikachu realize it will be dinnertime, but Jack and Pikachu do not know where Red run off to since the coming of Team Rocket’s reign came in. The only clue they had was close to Pallet Forest and then at Cerulean Cove.
Jack thinks and said, “Okay, just got our training good.” He looks at Pikachu. “The reason why is because the rocks on my wrist and ankle are heavy. So I need to keep swinging my toy sword around to make my arms better.” Jack checks, “Almost there.”
Jack and Pikachu walk to the left and head back to the gates. They pass through the gate. But then, the moment Jack and Pikachu come close to the exit, someone bumps into Jack, and Jack fell back.
“Ow!” Jack calls. He gets up and calls, “What’s the big idea?”

“Excuse me.” Said a girl’s voice. “But you bumped into me.”
“Why you!” Jack complains. The girl has two sided hair and red iris eyes. She is also wearing a blue shirt, black shorts, and a white skirt. And next to her looks almost like a wolf but with black fur, fangs, wolf paws, and a long wolf tail.
“Why don’t you watch where you’re going?” She asks. She sees Jack surprised. “Huh? Hey, you look familiar.”
Jack asks, “Me?”
“Pika?” Ask Pikachu.
The girl gets up and asks, “Are you Red? No. That’s not how mom described.”
Jack replies, “No. Red is my father. I’m his son.”
She answers, “Ah! Then you’re Red Jr.” Jack and Pikachu drop to the ground surprised. She and her wolf like Pokémon look at Jack and Pikachu, surprised. She asks, “Was it something I said?”
Jack jumps up and complains, “It’s not Red Jr.! I’m Jack!”
“Okay, Jack. I’m Scarlet.” She said. “I’m the daughter of Ruby and Sapphire.”
“Ahem.” Said Jack, stopping. “My name is Jack. Jack Ketchum.”
Scarlet introduces her wolf Pokémon, “This is my partner, Mightyena. Her name is Nana. She came from my father.” It barks.
Jack introduces to his partner, “Nice. This is my partner, Pikachu.”
“Pikachu.” Said Pikachu.
“We’re just heading back.” Said Jack.
Scarlet said, “Okay, but just remember to watch where you’re going, Red Jr.”
Jack shouts, “Hey! It’s not Red Jr. It’s not Son of Red. It’s Jack!” And then Jack and Pikachu left back to Pallet Town.
“If you have the chance, come by to the Hoenn Region for a battle.” Scarlet calls. “What an odd kid. He almost reminds me of my dad.”

Jack and Pikachu finally come back to Pallet Town. They head on home to go see Jack’s mom and little sister. The town is almost preparing for the party to be at Professor Oak’s lab. Jack is curious if his dad returned back from the mountain.
They come back to the house, but see only a small girl with long yellow hair, wearing a nice dress, and brown shoes waiting for Jack and Pikachu.
She sees Jack and Pikachu and then calls, “Jack! Pikachu!”
Jack said, “Hey, Sofia. Did dad return?”
Sofia replies, “Yes. He and mom are talking. And it’s almost dinner time.”
“Pika.” Said Pikachu, looking at Jack.
Jack looks at Pikachu and said, “Oh right. Mom is making spaghetti.” Jack and Pikachu look at Sofia. “I hope it’s not another argument. The last time Mom and Dad had an anniversary problem, she sent her entire Pokémon after dad, and Dad beg for forgiveness. And then the second argument, mom doesn’t like it how dad left.”
“Pika, Pi.” Said Pikachu.
“Well, this one is different.” Said Sofia. “It seems mom doesn’t want you to go to the Pokémon Association.”
“What?” Ask Jack, surprised.
“Pika?” Ask Pikachu, surprised.
Sofia explains, “She’s worried you might get hurt. Plus, she doesn’t want us to leave and go do anything dangerous outside in the real world.”
Jack is stunned, “You’re kidding?”
“No.” Sofia continues. “Even if you keep going out fighting Team Rocket, she’ll ground you.”
“WHAT?” Ask Jack, shocked. Sofia is surprised. “But I’m a Pokémon Knight! She can’t do this! I’m going to that Pokémon Association and become a Pokémon Knight!”
Sofia said, “Um, Jack, she’ll keep giving you more chores without dessert.”
Jack froze. He turns away and thinks embarrassed, “So, uh, when’s dinner?”
A voice calls, “Kids, time to eat.”
Jack cheers, “Alright! Dinner time!”
“Pika!” Pikachu cheers. Jack, Pikachu, and Sofia go inside and join their mom and dad for family dinnertime. Inside the house, they head to the dinner room and take their seats. Two other yellow mice with brown stripes, black pointy ears, and a lightning bolt shape tails are eating some Pokémon food.
“So, Jack,” said the father, Red, “I’ve heard you went all around the region to deliver letters. Is this true?”
Jack replies, “Oh yeah.” His face is stuffed with spaghetti. “I went to deliver the letters to all the gym leaders.”
“Jack, don’t talk with your mouth full.” Said Yellow. Jack gulps it down.
“Dad.” Sofia asks, “How are you doing?”
“I’m doing great.” Said Red. “How are you doing at school?”
Sofia replies, “I’m doing okay. I got an A on my grade.”
Red turns at Jack and asks, “Jack?” Jack froze. “Are you finishing your homework or are you getting an F?”
Jack tries to reply his answer and said, “Well…I’m getting some Bs and Cs.”
Yellow explains, “Honey, your son is failing again.”
Red looks at his wife, and then at his son. “Jack, is this true?”
Jack gulps, and answers in guilt, “Uh…yes.”
Red sighs upset and said, “Jack, you need to pass. If you don’t, you’ll never become a good trainer.”
“Sorry, dad.” Said Jack. “You’ve been gone for so long.”
“No, Jack. This is important.” Red lectures, “If you can’t pass school, you’ll never get into the Pokémon Association.”
Jack is shocked in fear, and calls, “Yes sir.” He asks, “By all means, what was going on?”
Red said, “Well, Jack, you see…” He would answer, but Red is too afraid since Yellow is next to him. And second, Red and Yellow discuss of Jack’s idea of joining the Pokémon Association is no easy. “…Never mind.”
“Uh, Daddy.” Said Sofia. “Are you coming home?”
“I am.” Red replies. “It’s been a while since I was away. I don’t get to see why not spend time with my kids.”
This time, Jack needs to know. “Say, I heard about the Pokémon Association.”
“Oh yes.” Said Red, “But when you’re older.”
“Ah, come on, dad.” Said Jack, begging. “Please.”
“I’m sorry, Jack, but you’re too young for this.” Said Red, making excuses. “But I’ll tell you anyway.” This caught Jack’s attention. “The Pokémon Association is a top organization for all Gym Leaders to fight against Team Rocket. They even asked us Poké Dex Holders our job to help out too. But I’m afraid they’re not looking for recruiters since the battle; therefore, you’re ganna have to wait until you’re ready.”
“Good.” Jack agrees. “Then I would like to join.”
Yellow looks at Jack and disagrees, “Unacceptable.”
Jack is surprised. He asks, “Why not?”
“Young man.” Yellow calls, “You can’t go.”
“But I want to. I want to fight Team Rocket.”
“Jack, you’re too young to battle Team Rocket.”
“I’m not your little son anymore, mom. I’ve grown up.”
Jack and his mom argue. “I won’t have this conversation, Jack De Grove Ketchum!”
Jack stands up and shouts, “Then I’m doing it right now!”
“Jack! You’re not joining and that is final!”
Suddenly, the phone rings. The whole family caught the phone’s attention. Red got up from his seat and walk to the phone. Next, he picks up the phone and answers.
“Hello?” Ask Red.
The family is curious to who Red is talking to.
“Misty?” Ask Red, surprised. “What is it?” Yellow is a little annoyed to Misty calling, but it doesn’t look like a phone call to a date, it’s a phone call to an emergency. Red asks, “What? Team Rocket is found at the Cerulean Cave? I’m there.” Red hangs up. “I have to go.”
“What?” Ask Jack and Sofia, surprised.
“But honey, you got home.” Said Yellow, worried.
“I’m sorry.” Said Red, “They need me.” Yellow doesn’t want Red to leave again, even from work. Red takes his yellow mouse partner with him. Next, Red walks pass his wife, opens the door, and closes behind him.
Sofia asks, “Mommy, are you okay?” She hugs her mom.
“No.” Yellow replies. “I’m worried.”
Jack can’t stand seeing him mom emotionally in pain again, and his little sister scared. He takes a stand, puts his food down and said, “I’m going after him.”
Yellow snaps out of it, and heard Jack’s words. She turns and calls, “No. Jack. You’re not going!”
Jack walks to the door along with his Pikachu on his right shoulder. “I need to.”
“Jack De Grove Ketchum!” Yellow denies, “You are staying in this house and finish your dinner!”
Jack looks at his mom and smiles, “…I’ll be fine.” He opens the door quickly, and hurries outside. Yellow and Sofia are surprised.
“Jack!” Yellow and Sofia calls.
“Pika?” Ask the mother Pikachu, surprised.
Jack pulls out a card and shouts, “Pidgeot! I summon you!” He throws it into the air. The Poké ball comes out of Jack’s belt, and opens up in smoke. A big bird with white fur, very long hair, and talons appears.
“Pidgo!” It calls. The big bird Pokémon flies down and gives Jack and Pikachu a lift.
Yellow, her Pikachu, and Sofia chased after Jack and Pikachu, but they were too late. “Jack De Grove Ketchum!” Yellow hollers. And then she said, worried, “Not again. Not now.”
“Mommy?” Ask Sofia, worried.
Jack, Pikachu, and Pidgeot follow a living-flying fossil Pokémon Red and his Pokémon are on. Jack is worried that instead of Red getting hurt, Team Rocket will strike again conquering the region just like before.
“Stay on their tail, Pidgeot.” Jack advices. “We can’t lose them.”
As Red continues flying, he tells the living fossil to fly down. Jack and Pikachu are surprised. They look down and see Red’s Pokémon landing on the floor. Down below are all the gym leaders including Green.
“What’s going on?” Ask Jack.
“I got your call.” Said Red. “What’s going on at Cerulean Cave?”
Brock explains, “Team Rocket have been spotted there since they attacked at the cove.”
“They’re planning something.” Said Misty. “But we can’t see what.”
Jack said, “I’m guessing Team Rocket are stealing Pokémon again, bigger ones.” He pats his big bird, “Pidgeot, let’s go to Cerulean City, and then we’ll make our way to the Cerulean Cave.” Pidgeot flies off carrying Jack and Pikachu to Cerulean City.

It is almost nightfall. Pidgeot lands on the pier. Jack and Pikachu get off. Jack returns Pidgeot back into its Poké ball, and the ball warps the big bird back into the Poké ball. Jack puts the ball. They hurry to the bridge and make their way to the Cerulean Cave.
“We can make it ahead.” Said Jack. “Just need to be unseen.” When Jack and Pikachu arrive to the bridge, they stop and see the gym leaders and Jack’s father heading to the Cerulean Cove. “Crud. I can’t let dad see us.”
If Jack and Pikachu get caught, they will be grounded for more than week. They look around to try and find a spot to sneak pass the gym leaders. Jack and Pikachu see a hole and crawl through.
They pop out on the other side; irony, they come out outside of the city and on to the river.
“Oops!” Jack said, slipping into the water. This gives Jack and Pikachu a good idea, and swim to the bridge. They get underneath, and eaves drop on the gym leaders and Red.
Red asks, “Any leaders?”
“Just one.” Blaine replies. “But you’re not ganna believe this.”
“Giovanni retired way back to see his son, and Pryce was back to being the Mahogany Gym Leader. Who else would come back?”
“Actually, Red, the man, Giovanni, did come back.” Blaine answers. Red and Jack can’t believe their ears. “The odd thing is that Giovanni said the same thing way back when you were ten years old. It’s a surprise Giovanni is back in his black suit. You’ll need to have your Pokémon ready.”
“I’m sure Saur, Pika, and Poli will help out.” Said Red.
“You sure you won’t need Gyarados?” Ask Misty.
“Or Golem?” Ask Brock.
“I’ll be fine.” Red replies. “I fought Giovanni twice. I can beat him one more time. He might use the same Pokémon as before, especially his trump card Nidoking.”
“How is your wife and kids doing?” Ask Misty.
“They’re doing great.” Red replies. “Yellow, Sofia, and Jack were happy to see me, but me and Yellow discussed about Team Rocket coming back. Plus, the Pokémon Association made her upset.”
Brock answers, “Because she doesn’t want Jack to join in, right? And John Oak was the only one that participated.” Jack became jealous of his rival. Letting John in but not Jack?”
“But what if your son did join in?” Ask Blaine. “Surely, Team Rocket are returning and we need all the help we can get.”
Red replies, “Sorry to say, but Yellow can’t accept Jack entering the Pokémon Association. She’ll be hurt and concerned of Jack and Sofia. I even tried but she said ‘no’.”
“My.” Said Misty. “Yellow is serious.”
“She’s really a good mother to Jack and Sofia, and doing the best for her kids.” Red explains. “But I’m not here to discuss about the Pokémon Association. I’m here to find Team Rocket and get answers.”
“Right. We’re almost to the end.” Said Blaine. “We’ll be behind you as possible.”
Jack and Pikachu dive into the water, and swim their way across the flowing river and straight to the Cerulean Cave. They beat Red and the gym leaders to the cave. Jack and Pikachu then climb up to the ledge and hurry inside the Cerulean Cave.
“Yes.” Said Jack. “Made it before my dad got here. Let’s go.”

Inside the Cerulean Cave, there are dark blue brimstone walls all over the place. The room is huge Jack and Pikachu are curious to where Team Rocket is. They walk forward to try and see if Team Rocket will show up or if the leader Giovanni will come.
“Huh?” Ask Jack, curious. “Where’s Team Rocket?”
“Pika?” Ask Pikachu, confused.
“They would have shown up by now.” Said Jack. They look around until in the middle of the room is a book opened. “What? A book?” Jack picks up the book and looks at it. “Whoa. What kind of book is it?” He checks the book and sees a younger kid version of his dad. “Huh? Dad? And his Pikachu?”
“Pika?” Ask Pikachu, surprised. “Pikachu!”
“You’re right.” Jack agrees. “That is Pika. But what’s a book doing here?”
A mysterious figure standing in front of Jack and Pikachu stares down at them. The figure wears a heavy black suit, black pants, almost bolt, an evil glare, and a rose on to his tux. “Do you like the book, Red?” Jack and Pikachu caught the figure’s attention by surprised. “You seem different, Red. Did you get a new haircut?”
“G-G-G-Giovanni!” Jack shouts, surprised. He and Pikachu jump back.
“It took you this long to remember, Red.” Said Giovanni. “It’s too bad your Pokémon are not trained even from our battle.” He releases his arm out, “Now, give me the book.”
Jack puts the book away and calls, “Like heck I will. Finders keepers losers weepers!”
“You’re not going to give me the book?” Ask Giovanni. “Your enthusiasm won’t save you. However, I’ll give you one more order to hand over the book, or you could perhaps join Team Rocket.” Jack pulls out his toy sword, catching Giovanni a little surprised. “What? A toy sword? You are not who I think you are. Who are you, boy?”
Jack introduces himself by pointing his toy sword at Giovanni. “My name is Jack De Grove Ketchum! They call me the Son of Red!”
“Pikachu!” Pikachu calls.
Giovanni remains speechless, and then chuckles. Giovanni lets out a big laugh inside the cave. He smirks. “A mere child said he’s the Son of Red. You are Red’s only flesh in blood? You don’t look much like him with your brown hair and green eyes. I’m even surprised Red has a son.”
Jack answers, “Of course he does! And what are you doing here, Giovanni? Are you retried?”
Giovanni laughs. “Retired? I’ve just begun! You think I was going to retire? You really are Red Jr.”
“Hey! It’s Jack!” Jack complains.
“Well then, Jack.” Said Giovanni. “You’ll make a fine opponent instead of your father.” He snaps his finger and brings out his Pokémon out of the shadows. “If you can defeat my Pokémon, then you can leave no worries with the book in your arms. But, if you lose, you will pledge your allegiance to Team Rocket.”

Now that's what I call a cliff hanger.
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Post by TheStrawHatKnownAsYellow Fri Jan 04, 2013 10:35 pm

OMG THANK YOU FOR PUTTING MY CHARACTER IN! I'M SO HAPPY ^_^
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Post by Red_the_knight Sat Jan 05, 2013 6:54 pm

I'm glad you liked it. But just to remind you, she only appeared once. There won't be much out of Scarlet until Jack and John head to the Hoenn Region for a visit. Does Scarlet have a brother, sister, or just an only child?
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Post by TheStrawHatKnownAsYellow Sat Jan 05, 2013 8:06 pm

She has a younger brother named Kyle. Who -similar to his sister- acts just like his dad but has Deep blue eyes. he's about 6.
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Post by Red_the_knight Sun Jan 06, 2013 12:20 pm

I have to say, over 600 views? My fanfic is popular. With some good comments about my fanfic, reviews, and likes, then this fanfic will become a video game in the future or an actual later/someday/if possible made up manga book.

For now, I haven't worked on episode 5, yet. I auditioned for Lt. Surge, but I won't do Koga since it's too hard to get a Samurai accent. I'm sure someone else will.

Anyway. Episode 5 will feature a battle between Jack and Giovanni. How many people on this forum can type down "Epic Battle!" ?
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Post by Jonk Sun Jan 06, 2013 1:01 pm

Can you edit your posts so that the first page has all Chapters and every time you add a new section just link to the first page? I would find that easier to browse the comments and read the story.
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Post by Red_the_knight Sun Jan 06, 2013 2:01 pm

I believe I can do that. Just don't know what if it'll reach the max of the pages or it's highest point of the page.

And it's done (sort of). I shall be working on Episode 5 soon. Please, don't leave me hanging. I want some reviews, some comments. And what you like about the page and other pages. It makes me feel alive Very Happy

And again, not auditioning.


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Post by Red_the_knight Mon Jan 07, 2013 6:16 pm

Here we go, the final prologue.

Chapter 5
Jack pulls out his card and calls, “Venusaur! I summon you!” The ball from Jack’s belt opens up, and brings out the big frog Pokémon with a big flower on its back.
“Venusaur!” It roars.
“A Venusaur?” Ask Giovanni. “Oh, I see where this is going.”
Jack pulls out his toy sword, and puts the card into the slot. “Come and get some Giovanni.” He and Venusaur charges at Giovanni, “You don’t stand a chance.” Giovanni snaps his fingers. A big Pokémon appears from the shadows. It looks like a big clam Pokémon with a horn coming out. That Pokémon uses a powerful ice beam attack. Jack and Venusaur are caught on ice.
Giovanni laughs, “Foolish boy. I knew Red had Venusaur out, so I chose Cloyster. Such a reckless trainer you are.” He releases his arms, “I guess you’re not cut out to be a trainer, but to be a Rocket Grunt instead.”
The ice shakes, and both Jack and Venusaur broke free. “Guess again!”
Giovanni saw Jack and Venusaur come out and asks, “You got out? I froze you.”
Jack thinks, “I should had know Giovanni was using Cloyster. That Pokémon knows Ice Beam.”
“Ice Beam!” Giovanni shouts.
“Cloyster!” The Pokémon calls. The bivalve Pokémon fires another cyan ice beam at Venusaur.
Jack calls, “Venusaur, return!” The ball files out, and warps Venusaur back into its Poké ball. Next, Jack swaps another trading card. “I’ll have Pikachu fight instead!”
“Pika!” Pikachu shouts.
“Dodge!” Jack shouts. Jack and Pikachu jump out of the way just in time.
Giovanni comments, “Lucky break. But not lucky enough!” He snaps his second finger. “Earthquake.”
Jack and Pikachu hear a mighty roar from behind, and Jack swaps again, “Pikachu! Get on my back!” He switches cards and shouts, “Pidgeot!” The big bird Pokémon appears and carries Jack and Pikachu to the air. A big Pokémon appears shaking the ground. It has a metal drill horn shape, looks like a rhino, and stands on both feet. “Yikes! Rhydon!” Jack shrieks.
“Oh, you know my Pokémon?” Ask Giovanni. “Too bad it won’t save you.” He snaps his finger again. “I’ll crush you! Stomp!” Rhydon jumps high chasing Jack, Pidgeot, and Pikachu. Jack is surprised.
Jack thinks, “Okay, enough games. Time to fight back.” He announces, “Pidgeot! Sand-Attack!” Pidgeot dives down, and slaps the ground sending dirt to Rhydon. Rhydon is hit by sand, and couldn’t see.
“Huh?” Ask Giovanni, surprised.
“Okay! Return!” Jack calls. Pidgeot warps back into the Poké ball. He pulls out another card.
“Venusaur don’t do you much good. I’ll keep switching even if you try.” Said Giovanni. Jack pulls out a bow and arrow. “What’s that?”
Jack shouts, “Demon Sleep Bomb!” He fires an arrow shaped that has a tip shaped like a Poké ball. Venusaur comes out releases blue powder all over the arena. Cloyster can smell powder and falls asleep.
“Hah!” Giovanni shouts, surprised. “Venusaur knows Sleep Powder?”
Jack shouts, “Leech Seed!” Venusaur spits out a seed out from the flower, and fires at Venusaur. Something intervenes Venusaur’s plan by knocking Venusaur out of the way. Instead, it flies and hits nothing. “What?”
“Don’t think you can get away that easy, Red Jr.” Said Giovanni. “I have one Pokémon left.” A big rolling boulder like Pokémon came out of nowhere sending Venusaur back. Venusaur is trying to stay strong, but it’s about to drop soon.
“Golem.” Said Jack, surprised. “He swapped quickly. But how?”
A voice shouts, “Jack!” Jack and Pikachu know that voice. They turn around and see an adult figure with the gym leaders.
“Dad!” Jack shouts.
“Pika!” Pikachu shouts.
Giovanni sees Jack’s father. “Huh? Red?” He smirks, “So, you are grown up.”
“Giovanni.” Said Red, furious. “I should have known.”
“So it is Giovanni.” Said Blaine, worried. “I knew this day would come.”
Red pulls out his Poké ball and calls, “Hold on, son!” But instead bumps into some kind of invisible wall. “Ugh! What?”
“An invisible barrier.” Said Brock, surprised. “Your son is battling against Giovanni. We can’t get through!”
Jack shouts, “I’m okay, dad!”
“No you’re not!” Red denies. “Giovanni is too strong to your level! You need to switch with me, now!”
“It’s too late, Red.” Said Giovanni. “Your son is doomed to have a 3-on-3 battle. The wager is on.”
Red struggles. “Dang. I can’t help my son.” He looks at Brock, “Wait, Brock, do you have Jack’s sword?”
Brock remembers and pulls it out, “Yeah. I made it. Why?”
Red reaches his hand to the sword while Jack battles Giovanni. “This is why.” Red pulls out the sword and calls, “Son! Here!” He tosses the sword into the air in the middle of the battle. Jack sees the sword coming down and stays on the ground.
“What?” Ask Giovanni, confused. “What kind of toy sword is that?”
Jack shouts, “Venusaur! Leech Seed!” Venusaur lets out another seed. The big flower spits out a seed, and then it hits Golem. Golem is losing a lot of energy. Jack reaches to his sword, “Got it!” He pulls the card out of the toy sword, and then fits the card to his new sword. “Watch out, Giovanni! I am the Pokémon Knight!”
“So you got a new toy?” Ask Giovanni, mocking Jack. “You’re still no match again me.” He snaps his finger and calls, “Ice Beam!”
Jack shouts, “Venusaur! Solarbeam!”
“Stupid boy!” Giovanni calls. “Solarbeam won’t save you!” Ice Beam hits Venusaur, but Venusaur doesn’t faint. Giovanni is surprised Venusaur is still surprised. “It lives?”
“Remember, Giovanni.” Jack explains, “Venusaur has leeched Golem for too long, and you didn’t even swap back into its Poké ball. You kept it out for too long. That is not the Pokémon Trainer way.”
Red agrees, “He’s right.” The gym leaders look at Red.
“How do you know?” Ask Misty.
Red explains, “When I fought against Giovanni, he had his Poké balls on the ground, and they come out on their own one-by-one by his commands. But Giovanni didn’t bother to put them back into the Poké ball, I did. And since Giovanni’s Golem was too long out of its Poké ball, Venusaur continues recovering. That would had mean Venusaur has a chance to fight back by one blast.”
Jack continues, “That’s not all. My Venusaur and dad’s Venusaur are special Pokémon, kind of like a Special attack type that relies on well, Special. Since Ice Beam is a special move, and Venusaur is well trained on Special, Venusaur remains strong for almost a long time. And now…” Jack shouts, “Venusaur! Blast them with Solarbeam!”
“Venusaur!” Venusaur blasts a powerful yellow beam out of its big flower. The big yellow beam hits Cloyster, causing one big knock out. Not only Cloyster was out, but also Golem faints for staying out for too long. Rhydon and Giovanni struggle in fear.
“This can’t be!” Giovanni shouts. “I had the perfect match.”
“But you’re an also unfair fighter.” Jack shouts. “You should be a shame of yourself, letting your Pokémon out for too long.” He shouts, “Venusaur! One more time!”
“I won’t let you!” Giovanni shouts. “Rhydon! End them now! Fissure!”
Red shouts, surprised, “Jack! Watch out! That’s fissure!”
Jack and Venusaur hold their round. Rhydon stomps the ground, causing a huge crack towards Jack and Venusaur. But somehow Fissure missed. It cracks beside Jack and Venusaur. Giovanni shouts, “What?” It may crack open the ground, but it wasn’t even close to hitting Venusaur.
Jack shouts, “Last move! Solarbeam!”
Venusaur shouts, “Venusaur!” Venusaur blasts one more yellow light towards Rhydon, and Rhydon is blasted straight to wall. Rhydon faints.
Giovanni is shocked he lost. “I…lost…by…a mere boy?” He looks down in defeat. “So, I am going in retirement.”
Jack sees Rhydon and Giovanni, and cheers with a pose, “Yeah! Never mess with the best!”
“Pi! Pikachu!” Pikachu cheers.
“Venu! Venusaur!” Venusaur cheers.
Giovanni spoke, “Don’t think this is over.” Jack and his Pokémon stare at Giovanni, surprised. Red and the gym leaders look at Giovanni. Giovanni speaks in a horrify tone, “This future will be ripped apart.” Giovanni flies up like a rag doll.
“Wha!” Jack shouts, surprised.
“Pika!” Pikachu shrieks, surprised.
“Venu?” Ask Venusaur, surprised.
“What’s going on?” Ask Red, surprised.
Giovanni continues speaking, “Soon, this world will disappear along with the other worlds. You are all useless as adults, but not your child side. I will conquer the world, and make this new world mine. You wait and see Red and Jack Ketchum.”
Giovanni drops to the ground and melts its body into black ink. Giovanni is no more.
“What the?” Ask Jack, surprised. “Was he?”
Red pulls Jack and calls, “Stay back, Jack!” Jack froze.
Blaine investigates the ink from Giovanni’s remains. He checks with his information scanner and then finds out about the ink body. “Strange. How Strange.”
“What is it?” Ask Misty.
“Its just ink.” Blaine replies.
“Ink?” Ask Brock. “But Giovanni melted into ink.” He looks at Giovanni’s other Pokémon. “Whoa! They’re all inks too?”
“Yes.” Blaine replies. “But this ink is too old to be brand new. I guess Giovanni is nothing but a fake after all. My only question is how come it used the same trick as the old Giovanni from before?”
Red replies, “I don’t know. Giovanni did that way back, so why did this imposter use the same trick as before?” He looks at his son and asks, “Jack, tell me.” Jack looks at his father, “Did you follow me here? I want the truth.”
Jack replies in guilt, “Yes. I did.”
“Why?” Ask Red, demanding. “You could have gotten yourself hurt! What would your mother say?”
“I had no choice!” Jack shouts. He answers, “I was more worried of you getting hurt. And…you’ve been leaving us for some time.” Jack turns his head away. “I don’t us to be apart anymore, dad. I want to be with you. And…” He calls, “I want to join the Pokémon Association!”
“Red, maybe you should reconsider this idea.” Blaine said. “Sure he was able to help out, but it won’t hurt for your son to join us.”
“Blaine.” Red said, “Jack is a little young to join in.”
“Come on.” Said Brock. “Sure, he’s in big trouble, but he’s your son and he helped out solve our problems from Team Rocket.”
Red said, “Try telling that to my wife.”
“I’m sure we’ll to talk to her.” Said Misty. “Red, how long had you been gone to do training for some time?”
Red thinks over it. He said to Jack, “Jack, the first thing you’ll be doing is head to bed. We’ll talk about your punishment later.”
Jack feels very guilty and said, “I’m sorry.”
Red then puts his hand on his son’s head, “But you did a brave thing for helping out. I’m proud of you, son. Just tell us before you do anything reckless, okay?”
Jack agrees with a small smile. “Okay.”
“Let’s go home, and finish that spaghetti.” Said Red.
Jack agrees with a cheer, “Okay!” He was about to put his sword away, but then the blade falls off the hilt. Everyone sees the blade fall to the ground. Jack froze in shock and screams, “WAAAAAAAGH! My sword! I broke my sword!”
Brock rubs his hair and said, “Whoops. Sorry, Jack. I never knew you were going to use it. I guess I didn’t make it correctly.”
Jack complains, “But Brock! My sword! You can make another one? You can fix it? Right?”
“Sorry, Jack. I’m a gym leader, not a black smith.” Brock apologizes.
Jack picks up the blade and cries, “No! My sword! Now I’m stuck with the toy sword forever!”
Misty asks Red, “Did this happen before?”
Red replies, “Well, when he was young, he cries about broken toys all the time.” He whispers, “He doesn’t know he keeps breaking them all the time.” Red takes Jack, Pikachu, and Venusaur, “Okay, Jack, let’s go home.”
Red takes Jack and Pikachu home, and Jack had Venusaur back into its Poké ball. Red’s big fossil Pokémon, Aerodactyl, carried Red, Jack, and Pikachu back home to Pallet Town. As for the gym leaders, Blaine continues researching the ink from Giovanni’s remains. Misty and Brock inform the Pokémon director about the Team Rocket havoc.

At home, Jack is back to his room along with Pikachu. Jack sleeps under the covers with Pikachu on top. Jack is more thinking about the book he found at the mission, but guilty for disobeying his mother and father. Since dinner was almost ruined, it is almost time for the day for the anniversary, and they’re trying to make sure Jack stays out of trouble.
But there is more trouble outside than inside. A mysterious light approaches to Jack’s window. It passes through the window, and flies on top of Jack. It speaks, “Jack. Jack.” Jack didn’t wake up. “Hey! Wake up!”
Jack woke up in a sleepy mood. He looks around and said, “I must be hearing things.” Jack goes back to sleep.
And then voice shouts, “Jack De Grove Ketchum!” Jack wakes up and shrieks. “Wake up!”
Jack woke up in a split second, and knocks Pikachu off the bed to the ground. “CHAA!” Pikachu shrieks.
“Who? What?” Ask Jack, looking around the room. “Who’s there?”
“Pikachu.” Said Pikachu, getting back on the bed. Pikachu is upset.
The voice spoke, “Finally. You’re awake.” Jack and Pikachu heard a voice that’s not inside the room or outside the room. “I’ve been trying to reach you, but you wouldn’t wake up.”
Jack taps his head trying to get the voice out. “Who are you?”
“You’ll find out later.” Said the voice. “But for now, I need you to do something. Look at the book you got.”
“What book?” Ask Jack.
“The book you picked up from the Cerulean Cave.”
Jack asks, surprised and softly, “Wait, how’d you know?”
“Look in the book, Jack.”
Jack gets out bed, and walks to the bookshelf. Next, he pulls the first book out. He checks the book through all the pages. The images from the pages are black, white, and gray. The book is okay. “The book is okay. Nothing’s wrong.” Jack closes the book and puts it back in.
The voice spoke, “Check the final book.”
Jack pulls the third book, annoyed, but then becomes surprised. “What?” The book has no pictures, only blanks. “But the book…”
“Correct. The book has been a blank after you read all three volumes.” The voice explains. “You see, I’ve been observing you from the…”
Jack shouts, “Yipe!” He throws the book to the ground in a panic. “Were you watching me?”
“Hey! Watch the book! I wasn’t going to say ‘I observe you from the book’. I was going to say, ‘I observed you from far away’. I need your help.”
“My help?” Ask Jack. He looks at the door. Jack is concerned if his parents heard him. “But my parents. Won’t they know I’ll be gone?”
“You don’t have to.” The voice replies. “Come outside to Pallet Forest. I want you to do something.”
Jack has no choice. He opens the window, and gets Pikachu on his right shoulder. Jack and Pikachu take a deep breath, and leave the house. Before they leave, Jack closes the window, and then head out to Pallet Forest.

Jack and Pikachu arrive at Pallet Forest, the western side from Pallet Town. They walk into the forest and try to find out who’s been calling through their minds. It’s too dangerous even for trainers to come out at night, especially wild Pokémon.
“Where are you?” Ask Jack.
“Keep going further. You need to come to the Grove.” The voice replies.
“Uh, whoever you are, I can’t just simply walk through that easy.” Jack said, “It’s a forest. I can get lost.”
“You won’t.” The voice replies. “I’ll guide you.”
Jack and Pikachu hurry through the forest and try to get to the grove. There are wild Pokémon trying to sleep and nocturnal Pokémon watching Jack and Pikachu running. The forest is too much to run through.
“You’re almost there. Take a left. Now right.”
“Slow down.” Jack said. “I am be in a hurry, but I can’t keep up with fast words.”
Jack and Pikachu finally reached to the grove. The open space has a few stones and logs. There is a platform across Jack and Pikachu people don’t know about. And on top of the platform is a placed weapon in the stone.
“Is that?” Ask Jack, surprised.
“Pika?” Ask Pikachu, surprised.
The voice replies, “Jack, walk up to the sword.”
“Okay.” Said Jack, unsure. He walks up to the platform and up the steps. Wild Pokémon are coming out of the forest. They watch Jack walking to the sword. Jack reaches to the sword in the stone. “Wow. What a sword.”
“Now, Jack, I want you to place you hands grip on the hilt.” The voice said. “And then say this oath. This oath will help you pull the sword out.”
And then both Jack and the unknown voice say the oath, “I, Jack De Grove Ketchum, son of Red, am here to make peace to all the Pokémon. It is my job to project those in danger and those in need of help. I will not turn away my job, or am I allowed to ignore the cries of help. I will become the Pokémon Knight, Force Edge Sword, lend me your strength.” Jack pulls the sword out. Light comes out from the stone, and Jack pulls the sword out.
“Whoa.” Said Jack, amazed. He is holding the Force Edge Sword. “So this is the Force Edge Sword. What a weapon.” He checks and finds a Poké ball slot. “A Pokémon Sword, huh? Cool.”
“Yes.” Said the voice. The hilt opens its purple eyes. “This is the Pokémon Sword.”
Jack freaks out, and throws the sword, “Wagh!”
The sword falls to the ground, drawing in closer curious wild Pokémon. “Ow! Jack! That hurt!”
Jack walks over to the sword with Pikachu by his side. They look at the sword. “What in Zucion? You can talk? Weapons don’t talk.”
“That’s because I’m not a weapon. I’m a Pokémon turned into a weapon.” It said. “You promised you help out, not hurt others.”
Jack corrects, “Yeah, but the oath didn’t tell me I can have a talking Pokémon as a weapon! You scared me!”
“Can we please focus?” It asks. “You have a job to do. You’re the Pokémon Knight, correct?” Jack picks up the sword and looks at it. “Allow me to introduce myself. I am…Mewtwo.” Jack and Pikachu are confused. The sword’s eyes blink. “What? You don’t believe me?”
“Uh…no.” Jack denies, confused. “How did you become a sword? This is confusing.”
Mewtwo explains, even though it’s a sword, “Because, Jack, I figured you’re into swords as your choice, so I used what’s left from Mew’s ability, and transformed into one.” Jack is more confused. “Okay, I’ll make it simple: You like swords, and I have the ability to do almost do anything. Does that reach you?”
Jack covers his eyes and forehead. “You transformed? Mewtwo, you don’t know Transform.”
Mewtwo calls, “Well, I’m a sword now. Unless you want to save the region, I suggest you pick me up, pull the dang book out, and get a move on.”
“Okay! Okay!” Said Jack. He pulls the book out.
“Place the book on the ground.” Said Mewtwo. Jack puts the book on the ground. “Open it up.”
“Like this?” Ask Jack.
Mewtwo answers, “Yes. Point the tip of the sword at the book, and call, ‘Teleport’!”
Jack realizes, “Wait! Shouldn’t I get used to you since you’re a sword?”
“There’s no time. Hurry!” Mewtwo calls. “Red is in danger and we need to go!”
Jack calls, “Okay. Teleport!” Nothing happens. Jack and Pikachu stand there like idiots expecting something to happen. “Huh? Nothing’s happening.”
“Pikachu.” Pikachu agrees.
“What?” Ask Mewtwo, confused. “Hang on a sec.” Mewtwo tries to move around even in Jack’s hand. Jack is trying to keep his grip on the hilt. “Jeez! You take a job for one person, and then you ruined the job. Where’s the manual?”
“Whoa! Hey! Mewtwo!” Jack calls, trying to hold its grip. “What are you doing? What manual?”
“Mew! You tried to teach me Transform, but I can’t seem to get Teleport right.” Mewtwo complains, trying to look around. “I can’t believe you got me involve into this mess! I used Teleport correctly just like you said, but I can’t seem to get out!” Mewtwo looks forward, “Don’t just stand there reading the Fanfiction! Where’s the manual?”
“Mewtwo! Whom are you talking to?” Ask Jack, confused.
“Jack! Don’t you have the manual?” Ask Mewtwo. “I can’t get Teleport right.”
Pikachu asks, confused, “Pika?”
Jack said, “Mewtwo.”
“Yes?” Ask Mewtwo.
“Listen to me.” Jack explains, “I don’t have the manual, or any other people does have the manual. This is why I need to get used to you before we go in.”
“You mean, practice, right?” Ask Mewtwo, confused. “Jack, we don’t have time. Red and his Pokémon are in danger by the second.”
“Mewtwo, isn’t there a rule about Teleport?” Ask Jack. Mewtwo closes his eyes in guilt. “You knew? Mewtwo.”
“Okay. Okay.” Said Mewtwo. “I remember now. You just need to say, Teleportation, and then the destination you want to go.”
“Okay, so if I wanted to say,” Jack said, “Teleportation; Pallet Town. Will that work?”
Mewtwo replies, “Yes, but you need to say it firmly. This is why Teleport didn’t work. I forgot how.”
Jack said, “Then I know how. Will the book open up if we go inside?”
“I believe me.” Said Mewtwo.
Jack calls, “Okay. Mewtwo! Teleportation, Manga Book!”
Mewtwo announces, “As you command!” Mewtwo’s eyes glow bright blue. Jack and Pikachu’s body are glowing blue, and then lifted from the ground. Next, they fly straight to book like they’ve shrunk and warped into the Manga world.
“Holy Arceus!” Jack shouts.
“Pikachu!” Pikachu shouts.

Phew. What a Prologue. I'll be taking a big break for fanfic writing since this forum is flocking with fans. Now, I want to hear from everyone who are in the forum about my fanfic, the prologue, the characters, and even the protagonist characters. I want to see reviews, comments, and details.
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Post by TheStrawHatKnownAsYellow Tue Jan 08, 2013 3:29 am

O....................M......................G................... -in state of shock- Nice job Red the knight! Very Happy Why am i up at 3 am writing this IDK pikachu
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Post by Red_the_knight Tue Jan 08, 2013 7:26 pm

Because, my fanfic is too hypnotic for all the fans. I just drew in over 700 views and they're still reading it like nuts. And I still can't do a triple post because they'll throw me out.

I do say, however, this is becoming popular. And not one single "Best Epic Fight Ever" I got from the comments. I do appreciate your comment, StrawHat.
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