Doodle-bugs

I can't open the spoiler tags. D':

Lets see if I have any uncoloured doodles on my comp... uhm... oh, yah, got a doodle from last year which I did on the train on the way to my parents' house XD

ratcher sketchy an' old (and the arm is disproportioned and all XD), but yah 83

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Oh wow, that's very good! 8D You have such a better grasp of the lower body than I do. XD I always have trouble with the pelvis and legs and sometimes the thighs...although the feet and ankles are easy.

Thank you ^_^ I actually have troubles with the feet at times, dunno why D8 Well, I guess I gotta practice them more to make my drawings better 83

Meh I just found some creepy guy off of the internet and sketched him =1

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Keyhala wrote:Lets see if I have any uncoloured doodles on my comp... uhm... oh, yah, got a doodle from last year which I did on the train on the way to my parents' house XD

ratcher sketchy an' old (and the arm is disproportioned and all XD), but yah 83

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Woah...
For a doodle that you made on a train, that is incredible.

@dabeatmaster123 lol, creepy guys seem to like being on the internet...

@Keyhala That's a really good drawing. It doesn't look disproportional to me.

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Yeah... I'm actually not sure if this fits here. Not really a doodle, but it is something I drew.

I know this is for doodles, but I just finished this shipping fanart and I wanted to know what you guys thought. XD Since I have like no watchers that would give me actual, you know, ADVICE, I can only go here for help. ;0;

So I tried something different for shading, and I also tried adding a quick background so it wasn't just..y'know...on white, but I'm pretty sure it looks terrible. XD What do you guys think?

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BTW I am totally obsessed with Soulsilvershipping BEWAAAARE. *fangirl*

That's really good...
I can't really give any advice that doesn't deal with the style you chose to draw in. The proportions seem correct...

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I guess you could've worked harder on that heart in the back....it looks a bit crooked...

Joy: When I look at your drawing, it seems to me you'r trying to go for a more realistic shading (rather than cell-shading) and the only advice I can give on that point is to dare to work with more values. Add darker colours, and don't be afraid to go towards a more purplish brown-ish for the deepest shade of the skin, since deeper values add more depth to the image. This seems to me to be needed most with the Skin and the lighter-coloured clothes.

The only anatomical things I noticed was that Silver's neck is a tad bit short (looks that way to me, at least o.O) and Kotone's right hand is a little stiff. Even if the pose is supposed to have her hand a bit away from her body, the angle from the shoulder makes it look like she forces herself to hld the hand exactly where it is... I'm not sure how to explain it better, but having the entire arm follow the same line rather than bending by the elbow might help with that...

That's all I can give comments on, at least--- hope I didn't come off as too harsh o.O

No, no, it was very helpful! 8D Originally, I had intended for BOTH hands to be wrapped around Silver's arm, but when I drew it in a sketch the pose looked weird and I tried to give her other hand sort of a girl-ish pose...? Guess it didn't turn out too well. XD

Alright, go darker...I thought I was going pretty dark before, but I guess not! XD

30-minute dooooodle of a small comic-strip thingy... With my brand New Tablet that jsut arrived!

Will fix up lines and colour and stuff tomorrow (almost eleven PM here and I've been up since 6 AM, so I'm too tired to work on lines right now XD)

Dialogue is also not finalized, so feel free to fill in the blanks with whatever you want atm XD

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Duuude....is Red supposed to look like he has girly-bust in the last panel? 0o

...no, he isn't XD that's what happens when you doodle too quickly (I also forgot those black arm-thingies he has XD) XD I'll fix that for the final lines XD

that's cute, VGmaster. But I don't know what it is. >w>
and your style is neat too.

Hm.. Guess I should put something here. >w>

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Duuude, Ezu, how on earth do you color like that?? You're like a goddess! *worhsips*

uh uh a goddess? >w> that sounds pretty...
XD anyway thanks haha. but really, I just did random colouring.. O_O And um if you want to know technically, I used SAI and all. Blending with SAI is lovely~ I love the marker tool. *w* so yeah.. >w>

I miss Wally.. >.>

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Did this on the bus this morning

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No doodle, per se, but pic I did for my new DA-ID...

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O_O

Real awesome drawings from the both of you! And Razor how do you manage to draw such straight lines on a moving vehicle?! I get car-sick if I do that...the proportions look kinda off on Kotone though. Really liked the others though =3

And Keyhala, seriously, just epic.